Sam

Yeah, it might help to have read the entire section, but... *kisses feet* Uhm...well, now that I'm done grovelling...THANK YOU!

Well, it kinda has to do with the fact that- *covers mouth* AHHH! can't tell! can't tell!

YAY! Rock on, Elore! Well... if you want to read the beginning, I could just PM it to you...

'She slowly corked her head up and examined a tree.' BLAHAHAHAHAHBAH!!!!! Good stuff, man...

Fossiking...that's a good word...

Awww...poor Bailey... This is very, very sweet. Very sad...*sniff* If you don't write more, I fear I may have to pound on you a bit. :D

The monologue was good, but I thought she was reading it to herself, not to the class. And then you say she left...*shakes head* Very confusing. If I saw it ...

I found this slightly out of character for our mellow, profane (teehee) Kayle...but nonetheless, pretty good.

I SHALL! AND WHY ARE WE WHISPERING?!?! Oh, btw, a couple posts back I had a complete list of links to these things...*shrug* i get lost trying to copy it ...

'bout 12 further posts :D Wow, what's with the sudden posting boom, people? tehee

My job is to pick out bits that detract from the piece; not to give you writing advice. That I do not have... Give me a critique ArtBoy, so I ...

to me it sounded something like this... can I f-ing get an f-ing pepsi right about f-ing now? HA! it's a world record...well, I do have to admit we talk ...

*before reading was prepared to give seventeen-paragraph-long harsh critique about how horrible the poem was, but jaw now rests on floor in shock* Well done, Ari! (if I may call ...

Well...uhm...it's not the beginning, but that's okay...

Fine is good. We use that a lot. :D