Sam

I honestly honestly can't find anything to pick on...this is great, especially for a kid's book. I was prepared to blow it off and go find something else to read ...

Hehe, that was great, especially the 'going to hell for eternity was a bummer'...tehee... All right. I give up giggling. *cracks up* Especially the Sex Ed. bit was GREAT. I ...

Hehe...yeah, I was trying to make it longer but I got stuck. GRR stuck-ness.

Wow, that is the true meaning of cool. And we all can relate, I'm sure.

The last stanza made me laugh...marshmallow...hehe. Maybe something like 'wax'? I'm not sure. The marshmallow makes it sound très stupid.

I had something before this...but it was horrible...and I thought it made sense enough without it :P

*pats liz's head* You mean the other end, dear.

Of course it is!

Tehehe! I love the a sick sort of way... You're spared from a thorough nit-picking of sentences by the fact that I'm using my dad's laptop and it's really hard ...

:P We were thinking of the literal sense...like...one bathroom...tehee...like at home.

Hehehehe. That was great... Only thing- 'I giggled more.' 40-Year-Old men don't giggle, really. :wink: YAY!

Sounds cool. 'Hypocrite In A Pouffy White Dress' is the only memoir I've read...and that was really funny. I'll have to check this one out too!

*cracks up* Well wake her up earlier...lmao...

^ ^ Me too...hmmm...

Okay. Try this again. Better as: 'Midnight. The clock rang twelve times, sound bouncing dimly from stone to brick to books and repeating itself. Maybe I placed the entrace wrong, ...