Sam

I thought this was pretty well done. :D I chuckled at some parts...just one thing, you might get some protests from the '...and Bush was fighting for freedom' remark. Not ...

This is the only line that caught my eye- 'Beige sheets and pillowcases and stuff'- what kind of stuff? I want to know! I have to say i really liked ...

I thought it was pretty good. :D Except you use the word 'drink' way too many times; it sounds clunky after awhile. Other than that, i liked it. I can't ...

OK, I didn't print this out and tape it to my wall, but i have to say I kind of liked it anyway. It was a bit too mainstream and ...

Actually, it kind of did. :D I liked it, up until the last line, which confused me. This was about telling stories, not getting advice. Please explain if you're going ...

Sabine, could you pm this poem to me in a different font? *blushes* bad eyes...even with my glasses on I can't read it. :D I really want to read your ...

The title intrigued me, I have to say. Curious Sam's just got to go read it...hee...nit-pick time! First off, you use the word 'there' way too many times throughout the ...

Quoting Cars and Guitars- 'A lot of younger kids would get bored with this poem, but I wasn't.' Hee...the eleven-year-old reads and enjoys. SO THERE! Although, I do have to ...

i thought it was very lyrical. :D The yeh yeh yeh's don't really look as cool on paper as what they sound like in song. I really liked this one, ...

I thought it was great. I didn't have to call the Cliche Police, so I guess that's a good thing, right? Hee hee...the only thing i caught was that you ...

I've given you all my critique already, Misty. :D Even after the second time, it's pretty good. I want more! Peez! (sorry, z, if you want I'll give you the ...

I thought this was pretty good, although I have to agree with everyone. Even us band/orchestra geeks couldn't get it, which is NOT A GOOD THING. Bubblewrapped, you have a ...

I have to say I liked this. Kinda short, so I don't have any critique, but I would like to read more. Sounds like my life. :D *shaming the name ...

Cool poem. :D I'll give you critique/compliments stanza by stanza. First stanza- I love the first two lines! It reminds me of my old house. Agreeing with Firestarter, the last ...

I have to say it was pretty good for such a short piece. :D I don't really have any critique, except for the fact that yes, it is rather short ...