Sam

Bum bum bumm... the whole vampire thing is really freaky!!!! runnnn! What I really like about this piece is that a lot of writers try to put their characters in ...

*skids to a stop* I'M HERE, KAY KAY! This section, for me, was so-so. If it's supposed to be some huge 'lookit lookit!' scene, you didn't really achieve that. Oh ...

ahhhh *durn* I forgot to put that part in italics! ah well... and then...i definitely need some help if it sounds like it was force. I did not force this ...

Yeah...I have to say the age-old words 'It was pretty good so far'. But..truth be told, I kinda thought, like ohhewwo said, it could have been better. Like you have ...

OHHHHH dun dun dunnnnn... sorry, just had to say that. I just thought that this was really good. :D Nothing helpful...:twisted:

RANDOMNESS, BABY! and i thought i was the only one...duh dun dunnn. Although, I have to sort of agree with Dusky for somethings. Like, what does a bloody nose have ...

*pants* I'm here, Willow! stupid abraham lincoln report... Not to be mean or anything, but this whole post was kind of Wow-My-House-Is-Bursting-Into-Flames-and-I-Am-Just-Sitting-Here-Placidly to me. S

WOOHOOO!!!!! Ok, one thing to say...this made me laugh so hard. You truly pay attention to the things in your school, don't you? SURVIVAL OF THE FATTEST!!!!! and of course...you ...

HAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!! One day the boy and girl were frolicking in the valley when all of a sudden the boy picked up a daisy and handed it to the girl. She ...

Personally, I thought this poem was so-so. The lines in italics were kind of...I don't know, just too slow for me. I loved the last two stanzas though, those were ...

I thought the poem was absolutely exquisite, but the title doesn't really do it any justice. It's kinda long and wierd...but that's OK. 'i thought you were trapped in the ...

Yeah, I have to agree this was really good. For weeks I have been waiting for a piece for my revenge...*hehe* 'here is where the world gets light and the ...

This seriously did make me laugh...here's what I got from it. So, there's this girl who's majorly freaked out because she's been having conversations with a ghost in her garage. ...

Ehmagod...did I really post that back up there? I should have said then...that I seriously wasn't breathing for the entire time I read this. That it made me get teared ...

It was a little too 'Let's Save the Rainforest!' for me, but I thought it was pretty good, especially with the pendulum analogy. That was pretty cool. I've never heard ...