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SalemReine

There’s beauty in the darkness… and then there’s me

  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Growing pains

    Hello there! And good morning/ afternoon/ evening/ night/ or whatever it is in your little corner of the world. Salem here for a little review! I have to say, in ...

    Jan 3, 2022
  • Short Story » Lyrical, Other Re: Light and Death

    Hello, and good morning/ afternoon/ evening/ night, or whatever it is in your corner of the dimension! Wren here for a little review! First impressions: Wow! This is an amazing ...

    Dec 13, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Alone

    Hey there, and good morning/ afternoon/ evening/ night! Wren here for a short review. Your poem was very well written and invoked a lot of emotions. The raw feelings that ...

    Dec 11, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Tell Her I was not Scared; Tell Him I know he was Brave

    Hello, and good morning/ afternoon/ evening/ night/ or whenever it is in your part of the dimension! Wren here to review this… this… tearjerker. Hi. Yeah. There needs to be ...

    Oct 21, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Into the Unknown

    Hey there, and good morning/ afternoon/ evening/ night/ or whenever it is in your corner of the dimension! Wren here for a little review! This is a spectacular poem! It’s ...

    Sep 21, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Monster

    Hey there, and good morning/ afternoon/ evening/ night/ or whenever it is in your corner of the world! Wren here to review your fantastic work! This whole thing is amazing! ...

    Sep 8, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Unrecognized

    Hey there! Good morning/ afternoon/ evening/ night/ or whenever it is in your part of the dimension! Wren here to review this amazing poem! This poem is one of hope ...

    Sep 6, 2021
  • Art » Lyrical, General Re: I'm Here

    Hey there! Good morning/ afternoon/ evening/ night/ or whenever it is in your time zone! Wren here to review your awesome work! It seems like this person that is written ...

    Sep 5, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Conversations

    Hey there! Good morning/ afternoon/ evening/ night/ or whenever it is in your corner of the world! Wren here for a little review! I love this short story! It’s engaging ...

    Sep 3, 2021
  • Short Story » Satire, General Re: Update Needed

    Hey there! Good morning/afternoon/evening/night/ or whenever it is in your corner of the dimension! Wren here for a little review! This story at first glance is hilarious, a lighthearted mockery ...

    Sep 3, 2021
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: isolation, my old friend

    Hi, and good morning/ afternoon/ evening/ night/ or whatever it is in your corner of the world! Wren here for a little review! First impression: this is an amazing poem! ...

    Sep 2, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I have nothing left

    Hello! Good morning/ afternoon/ evening/ night/ or whenever it is in your corner of the dimension! Wren here for a little review! I must say, this work is a little ...

    Aug 30, 2021
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Dragons

    Hey there and good morning/ afternoon/ evening/ night/ or whenever it is in your part of the world! Wren here for a short review! OH. MY. GOODNESS. GRACIOUS. HOW. This ...

    Aug 30, 2021
  • Short Story » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: Maybell

    Good morning/ afternoon evening/ night/ or whatever time it is in your corner of this dimension! Wren here for a review! First impression: This is an intriguing and fascinating story! ...

    Aug 19, 2021
  • Poetry » Humor, Culture Re: Um

    Good morning/ afternoon/ evening/ night/ or whenever it is in your corner of the dimension! Wren here for a short review! I think that @TheWordsOfWolf would like your poem as ...

    Aug 18, 2021


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
— LCDR Geordi La Forge