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I'm Here

by BornToBeGreat


Amor I'm only a couple thousand miles away
I feel as if we're never apart 
And I find myself daydreaming as I'm running back to you
If I had the choice, I would run home back to you
Just to see you happy
I'm still here
Lean on my shoulder to shed a few tears 
Tell me what's bothering you
Let me wash away your fears
I'm here for you
You're worth every mile between us
The distance I won't let it tear us apart
You'll always be close to my heart

I'm not going to let the distance hurt us
It doesn't matter how far you are
I'll still love you with all my heart
Remember the memories that we shared 
Keep them close to your heart
Amor you've been so dear to my heart
Distance is just a test to see how far love can travel


Amor I'm only a couple thousand miles away
I feel as if we're never apart 
And I find myself daydreaming as I'm running back to you
If I had the choice, I would run home back to you
Just to see you happy
I'm still here
Lean on my shoulder to shed a few tears 
Tell me what's bothering you
Let me wash away your fears
I'm here for you
You're worth every mile between us
The distance I won't let it tear us apart
You'll always be close to my heart

Just to see you happy 
Is all I could ever want
It's all I could ever ask for
Promise me that you'll ask me for help whenever you need it most
I'm here for you
Even though I'm not near you
I'm not right next to you
It doesn't mean that I never think about you 
You're always on my mind 
All the time
You're only a couple thousand miles away
We'll see each other again I pray

Amor I'm only a couple thousand miles away
I feel as if we're never apart 
And I find myself daydreaming as I'm running back to you
If I had the choice, I would run home back to you
Just to see you happy
I'm still here
Lean on my shoulder to shed a few tears 
Tell me what's bothering you
Let me wash away your fears
I'm here for you
You're worth every mile between us
The distance I won't let it tear us apart
You'll always be close to my heart

Distance
It won't take away the love I have for you
I know I'm just a kid
I mean every word I say
But all these words I say could be fake
I'll still be here for you
No matter what happens in the future
I'm still here
I'm here
I think about you all the time
I'm going to see you again
And I'll never let you go 
I wish I was there


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Sat Sep 18, 2021 12:23 pm
Aurora49 wrote a review...



Hey BornToBeGreat, thanks for tagging me! Sorry I'm only writing a review now. I read this a while ago but have been quite busy, so I didn't have time to write a review. Anyways let's get into it!

First of all, wow! Another absolutely amazing song! I defiantly feel like you have moved away from the NF kind of style and found your own! (Hope that makes sense) I'm pretty sure amor means love in Spanish, so that's very cool that you have added that in. Clearly, this is about someone very important to you/the writer. I love the lines "Amor I'm only a couple thousand miles away" because the words only and a couple thousand miles away kind of contradict each other. Even though the writer is far away from their 'amor' by saying only it lessens the distance. Hopefully that makes sense. I really don't know what else to say this is very beautiful and powerful. Please tag me if/when you write another song and I would love to read it! Thank you!




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Hello again!
Oh my goodness this, this song is simply breathtaking. I struggle to find more words to say as it seems to have left me speechless.
Your song has such a deep and devoted sense of longing weaved into it in such a beautiful way. the lines "you're worth every mile between us, the distance I won't let it tear us apart, You'll always be close to my heart" they really stand out because they could stand right on their own if you wanted them to.
your verses fit together perfectly and I love the rhythm you use in this, its distinguishable throughout the entire thing.
I don't really have any critiques right now.
Again this was absolutely breathtaking.
good work! keep it up.

as always,
Wolf






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WrenZorya wrote a review...



Hey there! Good morning/ afternoon/ evening/ night/ or whenever it is in your time zone! Wren here to review your awesome work!

It seems like this person that is written about is someone very important to the writer (obviously) and that they depend on them! The reader can see that the writer loves this person greatly, and they won’t let anyone stop them from loving their amor!

Thank you for sharing and keep up the fantastic work!!






Thank you for the review!




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