Sakah

Nit-picks Though we didnt get tired or really need to sleep, the shaddow like things still came, maby to add a little color to our skin. Though we didn ' ...

Heh, I'll get through the nit-picks (don't worry, not too many) and get on with the meat of the review ^-^ I awoke with a jolt, and tossed and turned ...

This is a really sweet story, I enjoyed it a lot. I like how your descriptions are right to the point, and your explanations of how Ben deals with blindness ...

Wow, I can't wait to read more of this and find out more about the owner of those pair of sneakers! I've never read anything quite like that, and I'm ...

What a fantastic story! I absolutely love the plot and the characters and how well you portrayed their feelings. I can only think of a few things you would need ...

This looks like a really interesting story, but I think the first chapter needs a lot of back story to explain a few things. Why did Mary run away in ...

Ooh, ooh, I sense a vampire story in the making! It's a lovely prolougue (clip, first chapter, or whatever you want to call it.) The nightmare is pretty fascinating and ...

It always kinda sucked to always have to mention my feelings for Ted to Mars and for her to just listen. She's not what you call boy crazy and she ...

Holly: Are you going to stalk me now? Oliver: Oh. That was my original intention. Holly: … xD Wow, these conversations with robots are completely fascinating! They don't make much ...

This prolouge is intuiging, and I think it has potential to become a great story, but it's a little confusing. What history does Moonstar share with the other cats? How ...

Such a chilling prolouge! The last sentence was very intruiging - I can't wait to see how this will turn out. The characters seemed to be a little flat though, ...

Wow, your writing style is fantastic! I love how real your characters are and the humor in this story ^-^ The first sentence really hooked me into your story. I ...

Ooh, the plotline is pretty interesting - a dancer that is completely committed to her work, yet hasn't found any thick friendships. I like Tommy because he really seems like ...

Oh my gosh, that was an incredibly wonderful/sweet/cute one-shot! Your characterization of Alice is completely awesome - I also love how you managed to infuse a little of her fashion ...

‘You know we really need to break you of this fetish for running.’ Ha, I love this :roll: I really like your fic so far, the characterization is great, and ...