RyiaGreene

Hello ^.^ This will be a short review. I didn't notice any grammatical errors, so that's always a good sign. I like the descriptions you used to describe the woman. ...

Hello :) Ok first off-- LOVED the story!!! Very wonderful descriptive sentences. Jake sure did go through a lot to get his homework in lol. The only thing I've noticed ...

Hello again! :D I have to start out by saying-- I KNEW IT!!! That really sucks that Jack did die. But you sure did set it up in a nice ...

Hello :) I really like this story. I'm a bit of a gore fan so this was awesome to read. I really like the descriptions you used when you were ...

Hell :). First I'd like to say Welcome to YWS!!!!! I've only noticed a very few minor spelling errors in this poem. In the line "You left me strangled in ...

Hi :) I agree 100 percent with the story you have written. It really puts into perspective the kind of world we live in now. Think a lot of people ...

Hello. I'd like to start this review by saying WOW. This is a very serious story but very well written. It hits pretty close to home for me. You can ...

Hello :). I was so expecting this to be a long poem. But I like that its actually so simple and small. You managed to convey quite a bit of ...

Hello :) I like the prologue for sure. It's very interesting. Seems to be grammatically correct, I don't see any thing wrong with it at all to be honest. Seems ...

Hello :). Awesome name for a poem!! I can't count how many times I've been hit with writer's block. Stuck dealing with it now as a matter of fact lol! ...

Hello :) Very good poem! I like it. I actually didn't see anything wrong with it. You seem to have commas and periods at the correct places. I don't see ...

Hello :) I like the whole backwards concept of the story. It's very interesting so far. I've noticed a few errors in your story, but it's mainly just misspelled words ...

Hey, glad to see the next chapter up here! I'm still noticing a lot of commas, but some of them were definitely in the appropriate places. I like getting to ...

Hello :). This actually reminds me of a poem I wrote back when I was in high school. Yes most of teens do go through this at some point and ...

Hello :) and welcome to YWS! I really enjoyed reading this story. I must say it would suck to die by tripping over your own two feet. Sounds like my ...