Rydia

No need to apologise, I'm glad you liked the review and it's always nice to know when something is appreciated! :)

No problem :)

Thank you for the lovely review! This is a piece I'd really like to revisit at some point and your advice is very helpful! Perhaps future me will do a ...

Don't apologise, it's nice to revisit an old work sometimes and I only really have recent poetry up as I'm not much of a short story writer :)

Thanks for the review and I agree with you a lot on the too many adjectives/ adverbs and things. My defense would be that this is four years old but ...

Thanks very much for the review! I've made some of the grammar changes and I'll definitely look at the bigger things when I'm revisiting this. It was originally written to ...

No problem! By the end, I knew that Koby was clearly the source, but early on it was perhaps not clear that there were two different types of magic wielders ...

Thanks for the really thorough review! I've made some of the grammar changes already and I'll have a think about a few of the other things :) and the birds ...

Thanks Wolfie! This one would definitely need a thorough re-write if I revisited it but perhaps one day :) This was actually a sequel to Mr. Pailey's adventures through space ...

You made a good try at it! Poetry can be hard to get the hang of, though I think I actually struggle more with prose but poetry was the first ...

Thank you! I'm glad you liked the poem despite not having much familiarity with snow and I hope you get a chance to visit somewhere wintry because it really can ...

Thanks so much for the help! This is one of those pieces I keep meaning to re-visit and lengthen and slow the pace down a little as it was written ...

Thank you for being super detailed and for addressing quite a lot of the things I'm uncertain about in this chapter. I keep going back and forth between starting with ...

No problem! If you have any more, point me in the direction and I can always do them later in the contest/ save them for a review day :)

No prob :)