Rydia

Haiiii! Alright so a few as-I-read comments first and then I'll try to give you more general advice at the end :) Count the beads of a rosary necklace, my ...

Haiiiiii! I found a lily poem :) Okay so some general as-I-read comments first and then more general stuff at the end! I am two backpacks by the bathroom door

Hi there, I shall be your reviewer today! Okay so let's take a look at what you've got here and I'll make a few comments as I read along, then ...

Hi there, let's take a look at what you've got shall we? I'll start with anything I notice as I read through and then try to give you some more ...

Hi! Alright so I don't normally review prologues as I'm not the biggest fan of them but I thought I'd give this a shot. My first piece of advice is ...

I actually really like the voice behind this, that dead-beat, not going to do anything about it but thought you ought to know tone. It's cool. What I'm not so ...

Hey there! Okay so I have mixed feeelings about this piece as there are parts I love, like the content and your imagery but there are parts I'm not sure ...

First, its taken some wading through the recent works to find something I was in the mood to review so kudos to you for winning today's star prize! I like ...

I have to agree with Persy, this poem was too concerned with rhyming instead of meaning or images and unlike Persy, I love poems that rhyme but every other element ...

Hi there! First, this poem is very sweet and it's lovely to hear you have such a great relationship with your grandma! I do have a couple of pointers though, ...

I think I saw the first draft to this, maybe in your NaPo or one of the poetry sessions? Either way, the phrase 'My Minstrel Boy' must be memorable/ catchy ...

Haiiii! Okay so I haven't reviewed in forever and am sure to be a little bit rusty. That said, let's take a look at what you have here... Title: Love ...

Hi! Sorry its taken me so long to get to this. I made a note to write you a review but then, what with the craziness of the holidays and ...

Imagery As 'Rina commented, you're using too many adjectives in this poem when sometimes less is more. Firstly, the image you're trying to present is of an empty shell, but ...

Hai! So I've been feeling sorry for the poor neglected General Articles section lately and decided I should review something here. Well guess what, I chose your piece! You should ...