Rydia

Hi dogs, I am here to be critical! :D Specifics Rotting tombs spout

Hello! Starting a Story Okay so I want to talk a little about the different ways you can kick off a story: dialogue; description; action. You've decided to begin with ...

Hello! Alright so I like the theme you're working with here, but the flow is stiff and the emotions aren't coming through. I'll try to point out what I think ...

A poem this time! You really are a writer of all trades - I like that. It's good to try different media and a lot of skills from one can ...

Hi! Me again :) See, you have to wait a few weeks for my reviews sometimes, but then I'm like BOOM and you get loads at once!! Hopefully they're worth ...

Hi! Sorry about the delay – works had me held up a lot recently, but here I am to review :) Fragmentation and Obvious Errors The first thing which stands ...

Haiiii! I am here to review :) What's in a Name? I like that you begin with the theme of names, but I feel there needs to be a more ...

Hi! Let's jump right in, shall we? :D Structure and Word Choice I'm going to try to give you a few tips on structure, because you've got some really strong, ...

Hi Noir! Now I know you said you only wanted me to read this, but I'm going to give you my comments anyway as some of them might be helpful ...

Hi Omni! Go ahead and use me all you like. Thank you for the heads up though and thank you to Black for suggesting that. It's nice to discover someone ...

Hello! So it's late and I was looking for something a little more light-hearted to be my last review of the day and your title grabbed my attention! Specifics 1. ...

Hullo! I hadn't really intended to review anymore today but since we're only forty short of the goal and there's an hour left, I feel obliged to try and reach ...

Hello! I don't recall if you asked for a review on this, or if I picked it out at some point while looking for things to read, but wither way ...

Hello! I recognise this is on the old side, but I am a Knight of the Green Room and I will not sleep until every piece has at least two ...

Hello! I recognise this is an old piece but it looks sad and lonely with so few reviews and even if your skills have moved on, I'm sure the comments ...