Rydia

Hello! It's been a while since I've had the pleasure of reading something by you - how goes it? Specifics 1. A ute rode south along the Hume highway out ...

Hello! I should probably say that my background is ex-Christian so I may not be the most qualified to review any of the spiritual content of this piece. I will, ...

Hello! Since it's almost Halloween and I love a good horror story, I thought I'd check this one out :) Specifics 1. The full moon bathes his dangerously perfect face ...

Hi there! First let me start by saying welcome to YWS and I hope you're having fun finding your way around the site! So I'm going to tackle a few ...

Hello! I thought I'd take a look at this for you :) Specifics 1. I think the second line should start with 'And' rather than but as the sentence is ...

Hello! I'm quite a big Pokemon fan so I couldn't resist checking this out :) Specifics 1. I like the name. It has the nice contradiction between vivid and colourless ...

Hello! Thought I'd take a look at this :) Specifics 1. In the Factory, every footstep crunched. It was no mystery why they did: the ground was covered in coal ...

Hello! A quick disclaimer that I haven't read any of the previous chapters so if I say something and you think you've covered it earlier, please feel free to ignore ...

Hi! A few in-line comments for you first: There's just no scheme anymore Poems are just broken up stanzas Try to avoid repeating 'just' and consider not using it at ...

Hi Strangelove! I wanted to say that I like the concept, but the brevity of the piece means I know it won't stay with me long. I think there's a ...

I love line three. It might sound better as rain drops spit on me like camels, but it's your poem so obviously that's your call. I'm just saying it would ...

Hello! So I haven't reviewed lyrics in a while but how could I say no when you asked so nicely? :) Let's take a look... Verse One - Good rhythm ...

I really am going to bed after this, honestly I am. Buuuuut I miscalculated how quickly things in the green room were being swept up and if I stop rambling ...

This may be the last one in the Green Room which means I'll have to reach a decision on whether to stay or sleep after this. Oooh mystery! Specifics 1. ...

I should really go to bed. I bet you're like 'who cares about the review day commentary, just give me my review!' :p As you wish... Specifics 1. Hahaha, how ...