Rydia

Hello! I've been talking to my mum this morning so I decided this should be the next one for me to review! Specifics 1. Nice opening lines! The first four ...

Next chapter! Specifics 1. I'd love to have more of Evian's thoughts on joining the Blacksmiths because I don't feel I understand his position there. Does he still think they ...

Hello! Shape poetry - I love how this looks like a cat staring at you and it's a great first impression to have of the poem. It also goes well ...

Hey Buddy! So its taken me far too long to take a look at this for which I'm very sorry but I'm here now! Specifics 1. The title is a ...

Hey again! Specifics 1. One long train ride and an unfortunate carriage-crash later, Malkolm trudged past the gleaming gates into Durthnõt. The gatekeeper, upon seeing his considerably dirty—but st

Hullo! Specifics 1. I'm guessing Gabe is the name of the horse? It's a slightly uninteresting title so it might be better if you called it 'Gabe Reigns' or 'Gabe's ...

Hullo and welcome to YWS! I thought I'd drop by and give you a review :) Specifics 1. I think at the moment the poem starts off with quite a ...

I like dark poetry but I want points so I'm going to review this anyway! Specifics 1. Long silent stares at her awing affairs, This is quite a passive first ...

Hullo! I've not read the earlier parts so if I say something you think you've already covered, please feel free to ignore! Specifics 1. As we're only on chapter three, ...

Hullo! It's review day and this is in the gren room so you know the drill :) Specifics 1. Everywhere I go the whispers follow. I think this would add ...

Hullo! Specifics 1. It's not clear what the beginning of this is - a diary entry the main character was reading before they fell asleep? Maybe that's something we know ...

So I'm coming into this super late and haven't read the earlier chapters but I love Once Upon a Time so I figured I'd give this a go! Specifics 1. ...

You already know you're a good poet so you get no warnings. I'm in a tear it down mood and I can't do it with my poem so I'm doing ...

So you liked me to this a few days ago and I've finally had a chance to check it out. Specifics 1. I think you need another line describing the ...

Hi there! Specifics 1. Popping a hand full handful of buttered -flavored popcorn into his mouth, Ayden stilled his growing hunger. The popcorn had been in the machine for too ...