Rydia

Hi! So I figured I should at least review the first chapter of this to remind me it's on my list :) Specifics 1. Do children really go to the ...

Hi! I saw you tag me to review this a while back and have finally got some time so here I am :) Specifics 1. Why is the sled slimy? ...

Hey, Sorry this has taken me forever to get to! I just wanted to leave you a few comments... Specifics 1. The half rhymes work nicely and I'm enjoying it ...

Hi! I've finally got some time to take a look at this :) Specifics 1. I'm not sure what the first line means - to be on hustle. I've heard ...

Hi again! Specifics 1. Two hours later.... This kind of time skip isn't necessary as it wouldn't take much to describe them travelling back etc. It would feel a lot ...

Catching up on this one next :) Specifics 1. I find it odd that after finding out the intruders are people Aisha knows that she doesn't ask if she knows ...

Hi! So I finally have time to review a few of these :) Specifics 1. I think a dash between 'struck her' and 'it would be fun' in the first ...

Hi again! Line-by-line 1. The first line is a little long/ wordy to really draw the writer in. We don't get many words as poets so it's really key to ...

Hi! So I'm not sure how much time I have today but I wanted to leave you at least one review before my friends get here :) Specifics 1. Now ...

Hi! I thought I'd have a look at this one too :) Line-by-line 1. Cute rhyming scheme - I especially like the half rhyme on the second line. 2. The ...

Hi again! I have some time now so I thought I'd review a few of your poems :) Line-by-line 1. The line break is a little awkward between the first ...

Hi! Sorry this has taken me forever but I'm here now :) Specifics 1. It was surprisingly cosy inside. The walls were painted sky blue and a lush thick carpet ...

This one next! Specifics 1. I'm confused - why is Carly's name called as well as Scarlet? Is the speaker talking to multiple people? That's not clear. Or is the ...

Hi, I thought I'd take a look at this one first :) Specifics 1. I'd normally suggest starting a chapter with some description to set the scene and tell us ...

I've just remembered I have laundry to put away so this may well be the last part for today but hopefully I'll get a chance to write more reviews next ...