Rydia

I think you need to capitalise the first letter of each line, even when it's a run on sentence, just so that it looks more like a poem. As for ...

I think it's mostly about life in general and as the title suggests the beginning and end of life. Am I anywhere near? As for the poem itself, I found ...

The language you use in this poem is rather advanced and like Matt said, the imagery is vivid and realistic. I feel that 'bright blue sky' takes away from the ...

I too like the imagery of the storm. Perhaps though, you should make more of the fact that it's building up through the poem. I love the first line, it's ...

I like how you go through the seasons in this poem and I agree that the comparisson of humans to plants is unique and thought provoking. I can really relate ...

Simple but interesting. You obviously have a talent for languages which I envy greatly. I'm not sure what it is that I like about this poem but I think it ...

Awwww. That was really sweet and it certainly has some good ideas, you just need to work a little with your structure and try to use more elaborate language and ...

Hmmm. I'm not sure about this one. I like the idea behind it but I agree that it needs a little work. It's very raw and I think with a ...