Rydia

Hi again! I'm still between books so it looks like I'm going to review on my commute instead while I wait for Amazon to bring me the one that I ...

Last one for now! Specifics 1. I'm not sure I understand Artemis' comment about huntresses - who does she mean? Maia and Peridot? Or some other people who aren't there? ...

Oh look, I found another chapter I haven't reviewed yet! :) Specifics 1. Charlie, Alfie and Loki all kneeled down with their hands up. Maia, however, hurled herself at the ...

Hi Infinite, it's nice to meet you and I'm sorry that you're struggling with loneliness! I had a pretty bad case of it when I was younger but you can ...

Hi again! This is a very short chapter so I should have time to cover it before lunch but while this is good for me, this would never be true ...

I'm back to review the next chapter of this! Specifics 1. Does Scarlet regret being late or is she a little bit blase about this by now? The fact she's ...

One more before bed! Specifics 1. When you're writing a short story, it's even more important to set the scene than in a novel as you have to engage the ...

Hi! I'm going to try to catch up on all my reviews this month so hopefully you'll be seeing a lot of me! Specifics 1. Nice introduction! I think you ...

Specifics 1. I don't understand why they haven't had a magical doctor in already to check over Amir? When my mum's friend was still alive, if she slipped or was ...

I'm on training again today so perhaps I can look at the next couple of chapters... Specifics 1. She couldn’t know about Lena. This is a nice bit of fore-shadowing! ...

Hi! Specifics 1. The first line is a little confusing, at first I thought the supermarket was empty like there was no produce there or someone had taken all the ...

Hi niteowl! First off, I really love the theme of this poem and the premise - it's very genuine and fresh and is a really easy to relate to emotion. ...

Hi Again! Specifis 1. It seems a little contradicting that Amir said before he didn't have to do the spell and Edna would but he's doing all the work so ...

Hi! Here to take a look :) I had to look up what Amur is and I'm still not sure I understand where it relates to war as it seems ...

So I'm terribly behind on this but I figured it was about time I reviewed another chapter! Specifics 1. “But after all,” he said to Edna, “it’s not like that ...