Ruth

Ancient writings for the win! It's great to look back and see how much you've improved. For someone who's twelve, this is very good. You're not just telling me about ...

Wow, Nick is sadistic. 'Don't forget your promise'. So he either wants his friend to die, or feel guilty for the rest of his life? He's a creep. :) Although, ...

Well, Fantasy isn't my usual haunt - stupid, I know, not less so because I'm a huge Pratchett fan. But I loved this, I really started to feel for Clara. ...

Wow. That was very impacting. You've obviously put a lot of emotion into this. Just because you don't cry about something doesn't mean you're emotionless... you've expressed your emotion through ...

Hi again! I wouldn't say the poems themselves are better than the first set, because they were excellent too, but you've presented these a lot better. You can really tell ...

Hi, I'm Grin, it's nice to meet you. :) The others above me are right. As a reader, I'm not feeling this, I'm just hearing the story. Have you ever ...

Hi, I'm Grin, I believe we've met :) Okay, I liked this. It is very confusing, but that's what love is like, right? All over the place. This is a ...

Hi there, I'm Grin. Right. Well, this was a little short, but it was sweet and with some work it will be rather nice. It could really be elongated, you've ...

Hi! I'm Grin. I love your idea here. It's something many of us have been through, leaving school, leaving friends. It's hard when all you're left with is memories. I ...

Hi, I'm Grin. This was nice. It has a lot of potential, but it was a little short, it didn't quite seem long enough. Right, you've started this with prose. ...

Hi, I'm Grin, it's nice to meet you. :) If the idea you're trying to put across is hell at the end there, maybe it would be better to talk ...

I liked it. Van had all the main errors for me, so I won't go into that. I will agree that if you had some sort of rhythm to this ...

Hi! I liked it. The lack of capitalisation worked, but I didn't quite get why you capitalised Rose - is Rose the flower, or a girl? And you've capitalised Background, ...

Hi, I'm Grin, it's very nice to meet you. :) I agree with Kat, there are a couple of moments where you've been too repetetive for comfort. This is hard ...

I didn't vote, because I don't think a poll is necessary - that's what reviews are for. So I thought it would make more sense to explain how I felt ...