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Re: Wander I shall...
Indeed it does fit :)
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Stargazer Prologue and Chapter 1
Thanks for the review! The Captain is sort of referred to as a king, but they're not the nasty, bad kings that make peasants have horrible lives. Cosma's mother was ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Stargazer Prologue and Chapter 1
Thanks for the review Messy!
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Stargazer Prologue and Chapter 1
Just the woman is a Princess. It isn't royal blood, thats just what they refer to her as.
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Listening
I appreciate the review! Thanks!
Jun 23, 2014 -
Re: Pretty Girls
Well, thats the point of the poem, is to be random. Appreciate the review, but I'm not editing it so it "makes sense" some of the best poetry out there ...
Jun 18, 2014 -
Re: Pretty Girls
I'm glad you liked the hidden message, "You Love Me To Death" "Skinny Waist. Big Breasts." "But Baby, we aren't meant to be together." "Fantasy Dream Boy with Black hair ...
Jun 18, 2014 -
Re: Pretty Girls
OMG thank you! Thanks for the nitpicks, and the repition of big was to show, big hips and big breasts, I think huge or humongous would've uh, sounded weird. The ...
Jun 18, 2014 -
Re: Pretty Girls
Thanks for the review! Yes, minor typos haha! I will fix!
Jun 17, 2014 -
Re: Shadow Friends
Ah! The stanzas thing, I have that issue too. I normally use a ~ between stanzas, or a few lines like this ----... You're welcome!
Jun 11, 2014 -
Re: I am done writing!
No one is being harsh.... I hope. Just try your best. We're all here to help.
Jun 4, 2014 -
Re: His Tears Cost 1M$
Hi Audy! Thanks for the review! I don't mean to burst your bubble... But the poem is actually about a guy! (Very long story with the dragon and -sigh-) Its ...
Jun 1, 2014 -
Re: His Tears Cost 1M$
Thanks! Yes, it can be a bit confusing if you don't know whats it about XD. The Forbidden Child of Snow is well... An anime character. He is cursed because ...
May 31, 2014 -
Re: Back In Black
Thanks! So you know, a group of ravens is called an unkindness. Like a murder of crows, or a parliament of owls.
May 29, 2014 -
Re: Paradox
I'll give you a tip. We're All Mad Here. Awesome poem dude! I love it!
Apr 28, 2014
