Rurouni

Thanks! All the commas are accidental, -has to remember to go back and fix that-

Thanks! I'm glad you got the message. I was trying to make it so when she was created and turned into a woman, her figure was more accepted, plump. So ...

I did the note because SOME people can make a fake connection, Pinocchio turns into a real boy, he was a form of a puppet, etc. Thanks! I appreciate it, ...

Thanks! If there were any commas it was by pure accident XD My inner story writer adding them in. Thanks again!

Night, I love this! -have a cookie-

It isn't in your profile, it must be saved as a draft. You can review to earn points to submit it.

I will, but I am a blunt person. 100% nice doesn't come from here.

Also, you could have taken my advice and looked over your poem and said, "Hmm... Maybe Ruro has a point," and edited it, but no. I know I'm not the ...

I was trying to give you advice, if you can't handle something this soft, you're not going to get far. You can either take it as an insult, as you ...

This... This made me think.

I think so O.o

What am I looking at O.O

It's fine, I just wanted you to know. I'm not a domestic violence victim, but... It felt mocking and I thought I'd just bring it to your attention

And I did read the entire thing.

I like this, but at the same time, I feel like it's mocking domestic violence victims. I'm sure it wasn't your intent, but that's how I felt :/