Rurouni

Hhahaha! When I saw mature, I was thrown off for a bit, the language is mature, maybe not the read it's self. This is pretty funny, I like how you ...

Ahh, I liked this... Normal is a huge issue these days, and many people take it as an insult (Well, I do anyways) and being normal now is considered something ...

Wow.. This was a rap to me, I really liked it though.. I jumped in and it sounded really good, even if the () and [] were suppose to be ...

Okay... This was good, though I have a few things.. Guppy doesn't sound very threatening, maybe make up a name? We could use some back story to this, etc... When ...

This was okay.. It was a little confusing.. 1) What is she doing in the street? Really, I'm curious and I don't understand that bit, who just walks into the ...

I agree... lol NORML is NORMAL or Normal.... XD Well, my advice to you is that they don't know you very well. I would like more, and believe it or ...

Alrighty! I liked this, I wanna see more! Please, more! okay, adn is and. woudl is would shifter is shifted. I like how you describe, most don't like this, and ...

I liked this a lot, it was really good in describing writers block. I have the same feeling in writers block XD (Don't we all feel like it when it ...

Oh.. This is sad... maade is made.. And, "Even as a doll, I can still cry such sorrowful tears?" should be "Even as a doll, can I still cry such ...

Hmm... Sadness is what comes to my mind... I like the poem, though the top two lines almost fight, to me anyways.... I like the whole poem, and I hope ...

Ohh! I like this, how it's about a volcano, and about emotions, a very good comparison! Okay, yes, formatting, but I understand. I like it all together, I'm unsure what ...

Oh! I like this, and the name.... Maybe some commas? I like the first stanza, higher then the skies.... "six in the AM" might sound better, "Six in the morning." ...

GEE! You wrote about kisses! I thought kisses were cooties? Anyways, I liked this Gee, it showed a lot about how love is just a game.. I like the last ...

Oh.... This is an interesting poem.. I like how you describe that the person can hear themselves break, and their voice, it's very intriguing.. I like the whole thing, but ...

Ohh! I liked this! I can see this being a wonderful song (hopefully not a silent one....) I like how you said 'silent song' as it gives us a feel ...