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thanks for the greate reviews. Yes I know there are questions and I'm pretty much making up (some of) the answers as I go along. I knew I needed to ...

Hi there just thought about poltergiest it seems like a misnomer 'cos the way you describe him he's calm

Very interrseting, slightly predictable, but all the better for it. I would love to see what comes of this story :)

What more can I say that hasen't been said already... Well done :D

I agree with *writewatiwant* it needs paragrphing. Apart from that there is nothing left to say... exept for my usual: Keep writing :) (you've got talent)

Well apart from the flaws listed above there really isn't much left to say. Unless you count: witty, and brilliant

Come on I cant wait to read more its torture

Wow thanks everyone

OK will relook at it knew something was wrong with it thanks :)

It seems wherever i look there are great writers. Very intersesting debut. Scary thought Earth in 3501. There is just one problem: I dont get who (or what) Star is. ...

Answer to most questions: I have no idea

Wicked... thats all i have to say. Kepp writing :D

Ok I'm going to ignore of the spelling and grammar mistakes and go strait to how well written the poem is : Amaising... thats it I can't say anymore. Keep ...

Thanks for the reveiws, I will definatly edit this, but i might not post it anytime soon

I dunno mabe poems arent exactly my strong point but u never know