Published November 14, 2008
Ive had enough
Cant take anymore
Hurts to much to ignore
For years
Ive kept it all inside
Still cant help but scream at night
Nothing ever seems to be right
Please I pray
Make it okay
Take me away
Always tried to do what I could
But it was never enough
To hold on to your love and trust
All this time you were waiting
For the perfect moment
What you don’t know is
I'm already broken…
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Ok I'm going to ignore of the spelling and grammar mistakes and go strait to how well written the poem is :
Amaising...
thats it I can't say anymore.
Keep writing (and tell me when you do):D
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