RubyRed

I like this because it not only describes how you feel but what you get from those around you. This is very dramatic and real. I would like to see ...

Thanks for reviewing my poem I will take your words into consideration. :)

Love this poem I can feel the emotion in this poem and that is sometimes what makes it more enjoyable. Keep writing!

I like this poem but I think that it is missing the pain and emotion that you will actually have when you're dying. Keep up the good work though, and ...

Hello! I really enjoyed this poem, though I will never be able to tell you why it explodes. It's very funny and cheerful.

Thanks! This comment gives me great encouragement to keep writing some more.

Nice I particularly like the description of the cave and the desperation to escape. Though when I saw the title I was a bit confused. It reminded me of the ...