RubyRed

Haha that's fine. Sorry, for the lengthy review. Haha. xD

Don't forget to click the star up top so people know you like my poem.

Not rude at all!! Thank you for the review and don't forget to click the like button! :D Stay blessed.

Thank you so much for the feed back I'm glad you liked it and thanks for pointing out my mistakes. The next part is up if you're interested. Don't forget ...

Thanks for your encouragement, welcome to the site, and don't forget to click the like button up top! :D

Thank you for your advice. :) Don't forget to click the like button.

You forgot to click the "like" button. xD

I loved it and find it very relatable! I miss my childhood too. :D

Thanks so much! I think I should do some flashbacks thanks for the idea. Don't forget to click the like button and I will inform you when the future chapters ...

Oh okay didn't get the notification. I'll tell you when the next parts up. In the meantime maybe you'd like to read this: I think you'll enjoy it.

Maybe I didn't make it clear enough but the camp is a small army under Kerrs's command. But since he's gone Tafe is leading. Anyway, it looks like a need ...

Thanks for the review. Don't forget to click the like button if you enjoyed reading it.

Hey just wanted to say, this is SO MUCH BETTER! I love it! (:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! All your tips are very much appreciated and helpful. I will notify you when the next chapter is up.

Thank you for your time. Rachael shows her flaws in the next chapter and becomes more relatable. Don't forget to click the "like" button if you enjoyed it! :D