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Re: This is How I Know You Are Straight
Hello, Audy! I really love the emotions, and creativity all put together in this poem to create something not only unique but also fun to read. I am an evening ...
Jun 27, 2017 -
Re: Cowgirl in the East
Hello, Master_Yoda! I've seen you on this site time and time again, however, I haven't even seen a work of yours in the Green Room till now. Excited to read ...
Jun 27, 2017 -
Re: Off Court - Chapter 6.1
Hello, BiscuitsLeGuin! So, I haven't been reading any of the other parts of your story simply because I haven't caught them in the Green Room where I usually look for ...
Jun 27, 2017 -
Re: Gall - Prologue
Hello, TessyBoo! And seeing now that you are new to the site, welcome to the Young Writer's Society! I'm going to make corrections to your work in bold or stricken ...
Jun 26, 2017 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 2.1
Heyyy! ^^ Had to take a lunch break... but I'm back now XD It was Benjamin, poking his golden-ginger head out of the cafeteria. He slipped into the foyer and ...
Jun 26, 2017 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 1.2
Hiya! “So,” Edna said, for Methodius was still muttering to himself in an affronted way. “What’s this about? I’m not a seer, I’ve never practiced witchcraft, and I’m not at ...
Jun 26, 2017 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 1.1
Hiya! Back again! In which Edna Fisher is bored with bingo, becomes the Chosen One, and leaves her nursing home for better things. I literally laughed at this, and it ...
Jun 26, 2017 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Prologuish Thing
Hello, BlueAfrica! I have never before read anything from you, and it had kind of been on my to-do-list... I'm glad I did! The title is very goofy, and I ...
Jun 26, 2017 -
Re: Time
Hello, kostia! First let me say welcome to YWS since it looks like you're fairly new to the site! And second... Wow! This just hit me like a ton of ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: .
Greetings, SpiritSails! Seeing you haven't been a member of YWS for long, welcome to the site; and I hope you enjoy you're stay; and find our advice useful! Interpret me. ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: Wonders Lost: Prologue
Hello, MissGangamash! Again it amazes me that such a great start to a story is ignored like this! It should have been read over and over by now, and people ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: Saxophone of the Undead(v.2)
Hello, Aleta! Although, the title didn't really lure me into reading this, I'm glad I did because it was like magic to my ears! If you read this work aloud ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: Occitanie - Brief recollection
Hello, Silberfee! Ruby here for a quick review! So, I've never really read a poem like this before--one of such color and description and emotion in such a short amount ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: Rachel's Wedding
Hello, beccalicious94! Just here to review for review day for team Marlins! So it took me awhile to understand what the meaning of this poem was. At first glance it ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: Panic, Tacos, and Losing the Vcard. Finally.
Hello, Mavis. Ruby here with a review from team Marlins for review day. First let me just say "Wow!" This was a very personal story, and for you to share ...
Jun 25, 2017
