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  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Debt

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    Hello, Morrigan! While this piece looks like a poem, does that make this a poem? Poetry can be defined in many ways. A poem should bring some kind of insight ...

    Apr 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Death's Reign: Chapter III

    Good morning once again, AliceAfternoon. It seems I can't stay away from this story. Let's jump right into the review this time. Emma passed a cell and jumped away as ...

    Apr 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Death's Reign: Chapter II

    Good morning again, AliceAfternoon. I must say you are so much better at writing stories than poems although I liked your poems I love this so much more. Don't let ...

    Apr 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Death's Reign: Chapter I

    Good morning AliceAfternoon. This is all so very good. I didn't want to read it because I'm lazy but this was really good! I'll just get on to the review ...

    Apr 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Starlight: Chapter 1 (Part III)

    Good morning, yizhongt. Thank you once again for requesting a review I'm glad you found the previous ones helpful and I hope you find this one to be as well. ...

    Apr 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Automaton's Heart: Chapter 1

    Good morning, Magestorrow. I'm here for a review as you requested. I liked this chapter. It was very entertaining and it still left some questions, which I liked. You did ...

    Apr 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Automaton's Heart: Glossary

    Good morning, it's Keepwriting here, as you requested. I really like this glossary and I think it'll be very helpful to whoever wants to read your story. Many times I ...

    Apr 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 3

    Hello, BlueJayWalker10. It's been a while since I reviewed your story. I decided to check up on your writing and see how things were going though. I see you've improved ...

    Apr 9, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Hello, Darling!

    Hello, InfiniteRectangles. Another great work from you I see. Your gift in writing poetry is quite rare. I really enjoyed it and I loved the way you described your darling. ...

    Apr 9, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Vinyl

    Hello, InfiniteRectangles! I really liked this. Always have confidence in yourself because if you didn't post this I wouldn't have a smile on my face right now. I liked it ...

    Apr 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Chapter 2.2, The Name Game

    Hello, BlackhawkUnder. I told you I'd go back and read your previous chapters well at this moment I have nothing to do so how about a review? I love this ...

    Apr 9, 2016
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Bang

    Wow, gruesome! Keepwriting here. I liked this actually! It was a bit dark... maybe really dark but I liked it... don't ask me why. I'm not sure. Anyway, review time! ...

    Apr 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Madness in Reality

    Hello, acm. This was so well written. I didn't find any grammar mistakes and the flow wasn't disturbed. You put such strong feelings into such a short work. I love ...

    Apr 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Spiritual, Fantasy Re: Fate

    Hello, xoxotiger! THIS WAS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE IT! I really don't know what to say. I actually started crying when I was reading this. It was ...

    Apr 8, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Starlight: Chapter 1 (Part II)

    Hello again, yizhongt. Just like the other part of your story I enjoyed this, however, there are some things that need correction. Marthan and Shayla had been talking for hours, ...

    Apr 8, 2016


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