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ohohoh me gusta! but I can't use it, as it's your own lines.

Oops! I totaly forgot that it didn't carry over from the computer document! My bad. it was italicized on my comp, i swear! *hurries to go fix the little glitch*

Ahhh! Those places where there could be a better word are so hard to fix! I sat at my desk staring at the computer screen and listening to music for ...

Amazing. Will I be in the YWS Highwind one?

Mkay. I've tried to say everything once and only once. *psst--I added in the beginning her name was Alexandra, although I had written that already, just in a later portion* ...

M.... interesting. Like Tamora said, fix how it looks like Elyn talking. I like how your new character is so secretive as well. I'll check back in some other time ...

interesting. Me gusta! I'd totaly go and read if you post it!

I wasn't too sure about the chastisment because I wasn't really sure what word they had used. I went for a safe zone and say a chastise lol. Omg, I ...

Hey, I know I'm not supposed comment my own because it's rude and persistent. I just want to know what people think of this other than somebody from my family. ...

Longer! Longer! :elephant: Oh, how I'd love to see what happens to poor, depressed toothpaste!

YAY! I think I'll count down, then. I don't think they're very challenging, but I really like them. Just like Harry Potter, you know? And, Lilly03, when you say The ...

Depends on what you want to write in the first place. What genre?

Very amusing. I can't really find anything to improve on this, but it may be from my inexperience of poetry. Even so, I like the way you repeated the first ...

I don't know about you but if I had a dream like this, I'd be scaaared. Good story, but perhaps looking over your work and reading it a few times ...

haha this is really great. :mrgreen: I wish I could use it for my school's dinner theater. randomness is good. keep it up =]