RoyalHighness

Whooops! Typo :) No worries, dear! I'm in no rush on this one.

*SCREAMING* *CRIES FOREVER* *CLICKS LIKE AND RUNS AWAY*

*pats*

Done and done! I think I cleared up where they are, I just added a few more descriptions. Thank you for the review, lovely!

Thank you! Well, Juno's not really a harsh person and she knows Asteria doesn't respond well to harshness. Asteria's a bit of an emotional weakling, if you ask me. There ...

Fixed all that! More descriptions, no more the looking-in-the-eye line, whispering instead of yelling, but I can't come up with a funny line to start off the chapter. Thanks bae! ...

Noelle you have an astounding knack for guessing what I'm going to write :P Asteria's parents DID take away the keys. But do you really think the Queen of Pranks ...

Well, shoot, what do you need me braying on about the importance of formatting? >.< I feel dumb now. You already know basically all of that review :) I'm going ...

I fixed those ellipses :) Thanks for the review!

I'd suggest reading the rest of the novel before commenting on this, because fewer descriptions are part of the story (and part of my writing style, as well). I'm sorry ...

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Thank you thank you thank you! :) Yes, Ben's brother raped Juno. It may change some things, but I don't think it changes as much as you think ;) I ...

Yay yay yayyy! I got rid of a bunch of ellipses (you're right, they are distracting) and I fixed the choppy sentence and the "man-voice," thing. But I want to ...

Thank you so much!! Unfortunately I have orders from the Mother to hit the hay but I haven't even read the entire first chapter of UNLEASHED >.< goshdarn everything. I'll ...

goshdarnit Anadir, every time I go to read your story (UNLEASHED- Lance Starfire might be my new favorite name EVER) a notification pops up! >.< hahaha glad you like it!