RoyalHighness

I. LOVED. EVERY. WORD. RoyalHighness has arrived to give a short and extremely complimentary review! Tone Your overall tone here was very interesting. I won't say whimsical, because it wasn't ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Goodness gracious, this was really great. Way to keep up with the enjambment until the very end. Way to keep the capitalization constant. I don't ...

Hey Writer! RoyalHighness has arrived to review! So overall, this was good. Let's talk about mechanics before we get into style and feeling and whatnot. First line- no problems. Love ...

Hey Glasses! RoyalHighness has arrived to review! And I'm sorry I took so long! Alright, so this was good. You're keeping up the elegant diction to match the time period ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Okay, as usual, I'll start off with I'm a huge fan of your stuff, because it's always really well done. That being said, I wasn't ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Okay, so this was pretty awesome. The beginning was slow, especially that first paragraph. I like the image of the knuckles as bridges, but it ...

Why did you delete this? I can see the reviews are scathing to say the least, but you shouldn't let that take down something you should be proud of. No ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Thank you thank you thank you for writing a short poem. I'll be straight with you, I don't like reading long poems. I'll do it ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Okay, I have to agree with magpie on this one. That line has /got/ to go. It disrupts the flow of the poem. But again, ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Let me have my moment of nitpicking before I get down to complimenting your fabulous work here. You need to put the period inside the ...

WHOA. RoyalHighness has arrived to review. I LOVED THIS. YES. JUST. OKAY. I'M CALM. I really have so little to critique I'm resorting to nitpicking. I think you meant "released," ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Alright, well, first off, Welcome to YWS! I hope you really enjoy your time here. Let's get down to some reviewing, shall we? There are ...

Hey Glasses! RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Wow, another great chapter! I love the elegant diction of your characters! It really makes the story believable and a little more real. ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Okay, I'll be honest, whenever I'm asked to review short stories, I check first to see how long it is. After seeing yours, I was ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! This is awesome. I can totally relate to Agatte's fear of being forgotten. I love the psychology behind dying with honor; you explained it really ...