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RoyalHighness

  • Poetry » General, General Re: I know that you hate me

    RoyalHighness has arrived to review! You tell 'em, girl! I was bullied for four years; I'm applauding you on this. However, there were a few nitpick-y things we have to ...

    Jul 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: My Teacher

    RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Wow, beautiful. Let me start this review before I start crying. Nitpick! Six foot tall, height speaks loud First of all, great line! I love ...

    Jul 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: The Truth About Forever

    RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Awh wow nice last punch-in-the-face of a sentence there! Let's begin. Nitpicks! We are the school’s talked about couple I think "talked about," should be ...

    Jul 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Voices

    RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Wow, way to give a sure, swift roundhouse kick to my face with that last stanza. Let's begin, shall we? Just, like, Two Nitpicks I ...

    Jul 10, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Life After Wartime

    RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Wow, really powerful poem! But you don't need me to tell you that; I'm sure you already know! So let's breeze over some little nitpicking ...

    Jul 9, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Teacher

    RoyalHighness here to review! So this was good! I'm not a huge fan of the sonnet as a poetic form, but I think you did a good job here. Let's ...

    Jul 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Would you read it?

    RoyalHighness here! What do you do when you lose it all? Make up for it by helping others? Nope. Get back up and rebuild yourself? Nope. Join a group of ...

    Jul 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical Re: A Poem of a Conversation

    Royal Highness has arrived to review! Well, this was a fun read! Funny, this happened to me and my brother just yesterday except we were intentionally trying to rhyme off ...

    Jul 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Worship Of Me

    RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Alrighty, no grammar or spelling nitpicks! Good job already. Every line feels like it was beautifully crafted, like good handmade Italian leather journals or somet

    Jul 4, 2014
  • Lyrics » Narrative, Lyrical Re: Jenny Fell And It Made For A Beautiful Betrayal

    Royal Highness has arrived to review! So this is really haunting and beautifully done, so let me get started on this very short and complimentary review! No nitpicks! The repetition ...

    Jul 4, 2014
  • Other » General, Narrative Re: The Farmer who sought after Riches

    RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Awesome fable you've got here! Is it really original? It sounds too good to be original. :P Let's begin, shall we? Nitpick #1 He longed ...

    Jul 1, 2014
  • Short Story » Literature, Fantasy Re: The Wicked Witch of The Circus

    RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Happy Review Day! Overall, weird, and I like weird. I won't re-touch on the things Dragon mentioned, although they have really good points, so make ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Of Love Defiant

    RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Happy Review Day! Wow, I loved this! This will be a super short review because I only really have praise! Content I have a friend ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: unspoken words

    RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Happy Review Day! Okay, so Chips and Katya have already pointed out the obvious. As for the capitalization thing, don't stress. Every artist has what's ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Letter to Cheng

    RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Happy review day! So this was pretty intense but to be honest, I had no idea what it was about until the seventh line down. ...

    Jun 29, 2014


So verily with the hardship, there is a relief, verily with the hardship, there is a relief.
— Quran Ch 94:5-6