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RowenaLynn

RowenaLynn

  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Sun

    Hello! This is really cool! I watched the youtube video and it was AWESOME! The lyrics are amazing and your ukulele and singing were really good. Maybe you could organize ...

    Dec 2, 2018
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: The Brightest Star

    Heyo! This is pretty cool 😎. One of my favorite lines: "Staring Helheim in the face"... or ""Oblivious- To the tempest approaching" One thing that could be fixed is the ...

    Dec 2, 2018
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Growth

    Heyo! This is a really cool piece! I personally like your choice of the lowercase "i" ... I believe that in poetry it's a choice to spell correctly or capatalize ...

    Dec 2, 2018
  • Lyrics » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: Memoirs

    Heyo! I want to start by saying that this is a really cool piece about memories... I really find that it connects to me and I HATE the feeling of ...

    Dec 2, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Sonnet to the Stars

    Hey! This is a really cool poem here! The rhyming is spot on and it all still makes sense, which is a problem that I have often, actually. I think ...

    Dec 2, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Wolf Eyes chapter 6 *rewrite*

    Heyo! I'm lovin it. Ok I'm just gonna get right into it... "Soon enough, (half an hour later), Emily dropped the brush in satisfaction, “There.”" I feel like its just ...

    Nov 17, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Wolf Eyes chapter 5 *rewrite*

    Hey!...I do have something due tomorrow but. I don't want to so more procrastination time, ay! Procrastination. ACROSS THE NATION! (sorry that's my favorite play on words and I had ...

    Nov 16, 2018
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Love

    Hey! I'm going to try to do a short review... I like the format of the poem, and the little ~ in between the stanzas. Personally I don't write a ...

    Nov 14, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Wolf eyes, chapter 4 *rewrite*

    Hey! back for another review. I really enjoy your work... if you can't tell... :D me and my awkwardness 8) One really petty thing, I think that in this part: ...

    Nov 12, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Wolf eyes, chapter 3 *rewrite*

    Hey! Here for a review this time. It's awesome! I really like this story. This sentence seemed a little off... "He pointed to a door with a sign that Zita ...

    Nov 12, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Wolf eyes, chapter 1 *rewrite*

    This is really cool! Big differences from the first one... It's great! Ok, so one thing that I was confused by... "The vampire looked amused, “Yeah, there’s some space in ...

    Nov 11, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Wolf eyes, chapter 1

    Hey! Great story idea. First, I was confused about what species Zita was... And her siblings are the ones giggling? I was just slightly confused about that. After a little ...

    Nov 11, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Horror Re: The ghost from rumble cafe part 1

    Hey! The idea of this is great! One thing that confused me was the change in tense. Throughout the piece, you sometimes switch between past and present tense. ' Proof ...

    Nov 11, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Quest for Fire ~ Chapter 1 The Shadow Lands

    Hey! This is a cool story! I really liked the way that you used dragons as the main focus. The different perspective is nice- being able to see a narrative ...

    Nov 11, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Puzzle

    Hey! I'm RowenaLynn and I'm going to try to make a review out of this... OK! so, I loved the last stanza so much. "I'm always working on it, Always ...

    Nov 11, 2018


The simple truth is that authors like making people squirm. If this weren't the case, all novels would be filled completely with cute bunnies having birthday parties.
— Brandon Sanderson, Alcatraz Versus the Evil Librarians