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Re: Sun
Hello! This is really cool! I watched the youtube video and it was AWESOME! The lyrics are amazing and your ukulele and singing were really good. Maybe you could organize ...
Dec 2, 2018 -
Re: The Brightest Star
Heyo! This is pretty cool 😎. One of my favorite lines: "Staring Helheim in the face"... or ""Oblivious- To the tempest approaching" One thing that could be fixed is the ...
Dec 2, 2018 -
Re: Growth
Heyo! This is a really cool piece! I personally like your choice of the lowercase "i" ... I believe that in poetry it's a choice to spell correctly or capatalize ...
Dec 2, 2018 -
Re: Memoirs
Heyo! I want to start by saying that this is a really cool piece about memories... I really find that it connects to me and I HATE the feeling of ...
Dec 2, 2018 -
Re: Sonnet to the Stars
Hey! This is a really cool poem here! The rhyming is spot on and it all still makes sense, which is a problem that I have often, actually. I think ...
Dec 2, 2018 -
Re: Wolf Eyes chapter 6 *rewrite*
Heyo! I'm lovin it. Ok I'm just gonna get right into it... "Soon enough, (half an hour later), Emily dropped the brush in satisfaction, “There.”" I feel like its just ...
Nov 17, 2018 -
Re: Wolf Eyes chapter 5 *rewrite*
Hey!...I do have something due tomorrow but. I don't want to so more procrastination time, ay! Procrastination. ACROSS THE NATION! (sorry that's my favorite play on words and I had ...
Nov 16, 2018 -
Re: Love
Hey! I'm going to try to do a short review... I like the format of the poem, and the little ~ in between the stanzas. Personally I don't write a ...
Nov 14, 2018 -
Re: Wolf eyes, chapter 4 *rewrite*
Hey! back for another review. I really enjoy your work... if you can't tell... :D me and my awkwardness 8) One really petty thing, I think that in this part: ...
Nov 12, 2018 -
Re: Wolf eyes, chapter 3 *rewrite*
Hey! Here for a review this time. It's awesome! I really like this story. This sentence seemed a little off... "He pointed to a door with a sign that Zita ...
Nov 12, 2018 -
Re: Wolf eyes, chapter 1 *rewrite*
This is really cool! Big differences from the first one... It's great! Ok, so one thing that I was confused by... "The vampire looked amused, “Yeah, there’s some space in ...
Nov 11, 2018 -
Re: Wolf eyes, chapter 1
Hey! Great story idea. First, I was confused about what species Zita was... And her siblings are the ones giggling? I was just slightly confused about that. After a little ...
Nov 11, 2018 -
Re: The ghost from rumble cafe part 1
Hey! The idea of this is great! One thing that confused me was the change in tense. Throughout the piece, you sometimes switch between past and present tense. ' Proof ...
Nov 11, 2018 -
Re: Quest for Fire ~ Chapter 1 The Shadow Lands
Hey! This is a cool story! I really liked the way that you used dragons as the main focus. The different perspective is nice- being able to see a narrative ...
Nov 11, 2018 -
Re: The Puzzle
Hey! I'm RowenaLynn and I'm going to try to make a review out of this... OK! so, I loved the last stanza so much. "I'm always working on it, Always ...
Nov 11, 2018
