Rosewood

Quite a poem! I don't have any criticism, and therefor, I will point out the strengths in your poem and a couple aspects that I really enjoy and would like ...

This is the first piece of fanfiction I have reviewed, so I don't have much to compare it to. But, despite my first sentence, I really liked it! Descriptive writing ...

I can see that this is a personal piece, and while it is written well, I hope you don't mind my two small critiques. We were extremely well-behaved otherwise, and ...

I always enjoy reading the lyrics and hear the talented people on YWS sing, and from what I have seen, you're one of my favorites. The lyrics flow smoothly, breaking ...

I'm a little late to review... I always enjoy short horror stories, but they require an art. I love that your characters are believable, in the verbal sense and in ...

I loved reading this story! Most of the work I review on, (so far!), has been short stories, so I'm starting to notice where more of the ingenious details and ...

I found this pretty funny! It served its purpose as a short narrative story that gave a nice ring at the end. As for any criticism, I have only three ...

Yikes... that sentence left me feeling pretty sad. It definitely served its purpose in giving the reader emotion, especially fear and sadness for characters we don't even know the names ...

The story was intriguing, and I found myself rereading it out of curiosity and hoping to solve the mystery of her lover's eyes and the strange little girl. I reviewed ...

This was a cool story, and because of that, I don't have much to say. The settings were well described, the characters were believable, and the writing was well executed. ...

This was a really touching story. Personally, I have been known to do the same thing. Swallowing back your pride can be really hard, especially if you think you will ...

This was very enjoyable to read, and unique too! I wasn't really expecting in ark in the ring's character, though maybe a shift in perspective. It made all the difference, ...

This was a very plain poem that conveys so much. I have read a lot of poetry, but have seen only a few like these; the ones that hide emotion ...

I started reading this, and I have to say... I feel you. People always wonder why I love the rain so much, and usually, I just respond with, "It helps ...

This poem was written beautifully. The concepts included in it was a tad bit deep for me to understand the first time I read it, but I started to grasp ...