RoseTulipLily

I don't have any critics for this chapter. However, I did enjoy the brief bonding or hint of such in the future anyway between Danara and Aggie. It'll take some ...

You're welcome! And keep writing ;)

I did my best to revise it according to your advice. Hopefully the next few chapters will be interesting and the characters will seem more interesting

You're welcome. :)

Thank you for reviewing. I'll try to make some revisions following your advice and will definitely let you know when the next chapter is published :)

Beautiful. You had me hooked immediately. Every word in this little piece of literature caused my interest to increase. The ending was simply wonderful. That is all I can say ...

Glad I could help. Can't wait to see what will happen next :)

I honestly cannot decide which one is the most scary. They all sent chills down my spine ;)

"a dead dragonfly, a corroded pitcher long emptied, and shattered eggshells.' Would be the correct way to say this. Other than this, I have no critics. This story was a ...

Short, but sweet. Sometimes, the best way to do something. Keep writing :)

IT wasn't my intention to offend you and I apologize if I came across that way. I was simply offering criticism

You're welcome and not a man

Firstly, I should point out that it should be "its advice" instead of "it's advice". Other than that, I mostly enjoyed this very brief story.

Thank you for reviewing. I admit I shed a few tears whilst I wrote this and couldn't stop picturing myself teaching my brother not to repeat my mistakes as I ...

This was a very poignant story, and it made me feel much nostalgia, unease, and sorrow. The last line sent chills down my spine. With such simple words, you managed ...