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Re: Messenger
I thought this was quite interesting, especially since I have had somewhat of a same experience. I mean, granted, I never contacted him outside of class, and I kept enough ...
May 11, 2016 -
Re: The First Crush
Hey, Been a while, but I thought I'd see what I missed while I was gone. Looks like I missed a lot! So, this poem. I am going to try ...
May 10, 2016 -
Re: Dear John
Okay, first of all: I am a sucker for anything remotely SuperWhoLock, and even had an "I AM SHER LOCKED" lock screen on my phone xD (Now it's just a ...
Aug 15, 2015 -
Re: I Will Stand
Wow Cody, this is pretty neat! It does kind of sit with the reader and make them think a little, which is good! I am wondering though if you are ...
Aug 14, 2015 -
Re: Forever and Always (I wrote this over two years ago)
You really love your dark themes don't you? Haha Well, for one, I liked it. I had no idea Morphine could actually kill you. One thing I was thinking about ...
Jul 4, 2015 -
Re: Monsters In The Light
This is a really good start! I only have a few notes, so bare with me. Pros: -It was super cute! I loved how you made the teacher the narrator ...
Jul 1, 2015 -
Re: Insomnia
Hey there! First of all, I loved this. The fact that you know, and can adequately use such words makes my heart soar. My notes so far: I only read ...
Jul 1, 2015 -
Re: Waxies Special Day
Cute, It's definitely original and I'd like to see it played out on a larger scale. Nitpicky as you are I only have one suggestion :P Fix your grammar. There ...
Jun 19, 2015 -
Re: 'Til Death Do Its Part
This is cute. I will be honest though, up until the last few paragraphs when your character died I thought this was going to be like the movie TiMER. Which ...
Jun 15, 2015 -
Re: Coal Dust
Interesting, very interesting. Being a student of theatre myself, I can really appreciate this piece. My review, because it is an art, will be mostly the pros and cons of ...
Jun 15, 2015 -
Re: How to train your rider
Is this for a fanfiction you are writing or are you just borrowing the idea to write your own story in Hiccup's world? Either way, it's pretty good. I like ...
Jun 8, 2015 -
Re: Chapter One: The Worst Last Name You've Ever Heard
I like it. It's long, like a chapter of a book -- which I am hoping it is. You have good character development and I like seeing how you add ...
Jun 8, 2015 -
Re: Not Ordinary.
Interesting story, will you continue? It is quiet good. I enjoyed the first bit of paragraph and all it's visual pleasures. You have a silver tongue. I particularly enjoyed the ...
Jun 7, 2015 -
Re: Wool of the Prince-- Fleta's Folly (pt. 2)
This is so cute! This entire chapter is basically about a pie, and that's a kind of chapter that I can really "sink my teeth into"! I like how you ...
Jun 7, 2015 -
Re: How they found him.
I thought it was really interesting how you kind of eased Gilbert and Krishna's relationship out into the story instead of saying "I'm gay, he's gay, we are gay together" ...
Jun 7, 2015
