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  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Messenger

    I thought this was quite interesting, especially since I have had somewhat of a same experience. I mean, granted, I never contacted him outside of class, and I kept enough ...

    May 11, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: The First Crush

    Hey, Been a while, but I thought I'd see what I missed while I was gone. Looks like I missed a lot! So, this poem. I am going to try ...

    May 10, 2016
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, General Re: Dear John

    Okay, first of all: I am a sucker for anything remotely SuperWhoLock, and even had an "I AM SHER LOCKED" lock screen on my phone xD (Now it's just a ...

    Aug 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: I Will Stand

    Wow Cody, this is pretty neat! It does kind of sit with the reader and make them think a little, which is good! I am wondering though if you are ...

    Aug 14, 2015
  • Script » Dramatic, General Re: Forever and Always (I wrote this over two years ago)

    You really love your dark themes don't you? Haha Well, for one, I liked it. I had no idea Morphine could actually kill you. One thing I was thinking about ...

    Jul 4, 2015
  • Script » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Monsters In The Light

    This is a really good start! I only have a few notes, so bare with me. Pros: -It was super cute! I loved how you made the teacher the narrator ...

    Jul 1, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Insomnia

    Hey there! First of all, I loved this. The fact that you know, and can adequately use such words makes my heart soar. My notes so far: I only read ...

    Jul 1, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Waxies Special Day

    Cute, It's definitely original and I'd like to see it played out on a larger scale. Nitpicky as you are I only have one suggestion :P Fix your grammar. There ...

    Jun 19, 2015
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Science Fiction Re: 'Til Death Do Its Part

    This is cute. I will be honest though, up until the last few paragraphs when your character died I thought this was going to be like the movie TiMER. Which ...

    Jun 15, 2015
  • Script » Science Fiction, Realistic Re: Coal Dust

    Interesting, very interesting. Being a student of theatre myself, I can really appreciate this piece. My review, because it is an art, will be mostly the pros and cons of ...

    Jun 15, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: How to train your rider

    Is this for a fanfiction you are writing or are you just borrowing the idea to write your own story in Hiccup's world? Either way, it's pretty good. I like ...

    Jun 8, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: Chapter One: The Worst Last Name You've Ever Heard

    I like it. It's long, like a chapter of a book -- which I am hoping it is. You have good character development and I like seeing how you add ...

    Jun 8, 2015
  • Short Story » Horror, Teen Fiction Re: Not Ordinary.

    Interesting story, will you continue? It is quiet good. I enjoyed the first bit of paragraph and all it's visual pleasures. You have a silver tongue. I particularly enjoyed the ...

    Jun 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Wool of the Prince-- Fleta's Folly (pt. 2)

    This is so cute! This entire chapter is basically about a pie, and that's a kind of chapter that I can really "sink my teeth into"! I like how you ...

    Jun 7, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: How they found him.

    I thought it was really interesting how you kind of eased Gilbert and Krishna's relationship out into the story instead of saying "I'm gay, he's gay, we are gay together" ...

    Jun 7, 2015


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