RoryLegend

ladida..oh hello there. So I just read this really great short story by you and I thought I would tell you how super I thought it was. Honestly I really ...

Hello! Disclaimer: I do not know how to really crit a play..I write mostly movie I will do my best. Sorry if some stuff is wrong. The age question: I ...

Alrighty, so I am interested..but I am also confused. What is going on here? Your dialogue and your information are all mixed up together. Ah! It's okay, it's okay. This ...

Hello! So I have to be honest. I lost interest. I'm not trying to be harsh but it sounds like you have a somewhat good idea started and I think ...

very nice. I did quite enjoy this. I am garbage at grammar so I can't help you out there either. You did a good job of making me feel like ...

*is speechless* Very well done, superb. I really liked this. Ah! So great! This was a really great story, it all it is a good subject to write about, well ...

Hello! So I really liked this I thought it was really cute. I want to read more because I feel like this is something actually worth reading. I was a ...

Ok props for writing a supernatural fanfic..I'm slightly obsessed with that show. Nitpicks: 1) The story was mostly dialogue and there was no real narrator. Make it one of the ...

Ah Supernatural! OMG! I love this show! The title was what pulled me in, I'm curious did you go with "Wayward" because in the season three finale (No Rest For ...

Hello, I agree, I like the username. Since I'm not good at catching grammatical errors and it seems like the others have touched bases on that I will not bore ...

Yay a good poem! I really liked this! It was well written, short (for some reason I just really really like short poems, maybe it is the fact that they ...

Hello! I read this story a while ago and I really liked it, I thought it was really interesting and well written. There was a lot of risk in some ...

Yuck sexual abuse..it's horrible stuff. It's why I was homeschooled, though my experience wasn't as bad as yours, mostly just verbal stuff. But it scared the crap out of me, ...

Nice Dice, I enjoyed this piece quite a bit. I thought it was cute and I liked how the topic they were talking about was quite ordinary but had insight ...

Wow..I definatly liked was a much more tragic ending to the already terribly tragic tale of the Phantom of the Opera..I am a big fan of POTO, so that is ...