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my interpretation: we zoom in from the planet toward creatures. a sprout says, trees are strong, but i am not. why? tree responds, no, you're wrong. trees are strong, yes, ...

Well there's an old face I haven't seen in a while! I totally agree that this poem is rather empty of emotional content haha. I made it with magnetic poetry ...

Thank you Hannah! This is extremely helpful!

Can you give me an example where the punctuation or structure feel strange? Thanks!

Yeah sorry I used the wrong name at one point! honest typo haha thanks for putting up with it! there's a summary at the top of i yhink the previous ...

Thank you for the review! these are really helpful comments! I think this has cemented my plans to redo the first bit of this chapter in the regular tense that ...

Ah! I do not have very much experience with horror poems! Good luck!

So it was kind of a riddle! Yeah I'd focus on drawing the parallels to humans in a clearer way, and maybe focus on only one metaphor for one type ...

Thank you for the review! That was a good note about Maru's dialogue. I bet that formality came about because I as the author recognized I was treading some kind ...

Yeah! I know the climax is at the end. I only have a few more chapters to tie up all the loose threads and make character development come full circle. ...

Thanks for your review! I actually took 16 credits of asl in college! It's definitely something I actually hadn't planned on including until I realized I needed a way for ...

I saw that part and appreciated it for sure! I think it was mostly just the beginning part ("Someone who is sexually attracted to two genders, usually both socially constructed ...

Hey! This is really pretty comprehensive and helpful for a beginner's guide to pride (hehe rhymes). I figured I'd drop a quick note about bisexual brcause it always frustrates me ...

"I'm going to break my nose" through the end of that stanza just absolutely hit me like a truck. What a powerful image!

Man, I'm a sucker for swamp imagery. Duckweed? that's my jam. Mosquitoes in poetry? heck yeah. This poem rocks.