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Hello there! :D These are the things I liked about your poem: -I love love love love looooove the story. I just love pirates in general and that's what attracted ...

Hello there! :D There are many poems about memories, but I like this one a lot.... What I liked about this poem: -"Memory is the notebook of your brain" that ...

Let's take this line by line, shall we? "The children have been through the depths of hell" Okay, so we're talking about children. Good to know. This was a good ...

Hello there. :) This was a really nice poem. These are some things I liked about it: -I liked the repeating of the three word and the way you formatted ...

Hello there! mind if I take this line by line? "If you're feeling lost and weary in the night" This first sentence gives me a nice, peaceful sense of simplicity. ...

This was the most adorable poem I've ever read. Kudos to you for that. I really like how many many wonderful things you said that were able to a) have ...

Hello there! I'm fortis. Welcome to YWS, by the way. This is your first post and this will be the first review! Mind if I take it line by line? ...

This is a pantoum isn't it? *reads the top line again* oh yeah, you told us that. Psh. I knew what it was anyways. I love pantoums! Anyways, I was ...

Mind if I take this line by line? "there’s a man i wish i never saw" I like poems to have correct capitalization and punctuation. It adds to the coherency ...

Hello~ Let me take this line by line. Title: Extraction This title is very unique and reflects the poem well. It can be extraction in the physical sense, or the ...

Hi Hannah! I'm here to do a review! Mind if I take this line by line? "the kind of grass that grows up" I'd appreciate it if you capitalized where ...

wow, this was an amazing haiku! You really packed meaning into those few words. -I'm glad you got the syllables right, because some people have no idea how to make ...

Hello there! I'm here to review! This was a really mysterious and beautiful poem. None of it made much sense to me, however. I know plenty of poems don't make ...

I kind of feel bad quoting the whole poem but.... whatever. I'm going to anyways. Also pardon my attempt at understanding poetry. "For naught of way, I want no eyes," ...

Hello Jordin! Can I take this line by line? The fire on his face.-- this is an interesting start, the reader gets a great first image that pulls them in. ...