Rook

Hello! About the stanza thing first. To make it so that normal lines aren't so spacy, do "shift + enter" and that will make a normal space between the lines. ...

Hello! I really like this poem. This narrator is looking back fondly, a little bit wistfully at a time gone past. This wistful feeling is such a universal feeling that ...

Hello~ I really like this poem. You have AMAZING and vivid imagery! It was really beautiful. I think that yes, it is a little bit clumsy, but after you go ...

Hello! Things I liked: -This was a nice, simple poem, with a clear message. - The emotion was clear. I could definitely tell how you felt. -This isn't overly descriptive ...

I LOVE LOVE LOVE your title! ;) And your poem is amazing and inspiring. I love the message you present and you do it so fluently. This is such a ...

First off: as an "essay" I feel this needs multiple paragraphs. However, with the word restriction I don't think that you can pull off a multiple paragraph essay. So you ...

Hello there! Fortis here with a review! (probably the longest review you've ever received in your life) Sorry to literally write down every line, but I feel that is necessary ...

Hello~ This was a beautiful, beautiful poem. You pack so much meaning into your words, it does the poem justice. It's so true. Words that are most powerful now have ...

Hello (See? I said it! :D) Some things I liked about this poem: -I loved the concept behind it. A guy in love with a girl who doesn't feel the ...

Hello~ I found your poem amusing, but it rather confused me like it did the previous reviewer. Things I liked: -I like the way you told the story. Your words ...

Hello~ So I really like the concept (not *quite* sure what "The Game" is, but I have a few guesses) of painting on a face etc. I really like your ...

Wow! I'm amazed at this poem. I loved the concept, and your rhymes were really really good. I could read it to such a creepy-sounding rhythm that brought about a ...

Hello~ I just wrote a haiku, so I decided to review one (or more). So all of these Haikus had the correct number of syllables, so good job on that. ...

Hello! I liked this poem, but it needs a little work, especially in the punctuation etc. But first, the content! I like what you're trying to say. Life is like ...

Hello Persy! So By this point in my YWS life I've read several of your poems. Of the ones that I have read, I seem to be getting a hang ...