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Re: A man - A poem inspired by "The Scream" by Edvard Munch, 1893
Hello! So I'm going to give this a review based on the poem, so sorry if I advise you to do something that's not what you were supposed to do ...
Oct 23, 2014 -
Re: Monument
Hello~ Here for your requested review! So I printed out your poem and reviewed it in pen during school, so I'm gonna try to translate my markings into actual text ...
Oct 18, 2014 -
Re: Autotonomy and Apoptosis
Hello! I'm here to save your poem from the green room. This will be my 250th review with which I get my fifth star! Yaaay! *confetti* So I looked up ...
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: It's Been Fun, Percy
Heyo! I'm here to help get this out of the green room. First thing's first. Why did you make this so big? I can read, and if I can't, I ...
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: The girl on gravel mountain ~Part One~
Hello! Guess who's here to rip up your poem? That's riiight! It's Meeee! 8D (I'm a little hyped up on energy right now so sorry about *gestures at everything* this) ...
Oct 6, 2014 -
Re: rosa borealis
hello, did someone order a review? So I think the main problem of this poem is that it's disjointed. You carry images over, stanza to stanza, but I'm not getting ...
Oct 2, 2014 -
Re: Phaedra
Yayayay! Hello. :D So I'mma analyze the title like I always do. I googled Phaedra, and wikipedia (bless its soul) told me all about her mythology. Phaedra means bright. This ...
Sep 23, 2014 -
Re: Don't Look at the flame
Hello! Okay, I know you said these were lyrics, but I'm going to review it as a poem, kay? Because what are lyrics if not for a poem with music? ...
Sep 17, 2014 -
Re: Just a Dream
Hello! I'm here to save you from the clutches of the green room! This was a cute little simple poem. Sometimes I think simple poems may be the most honest ...
Sep 17, 2014 -
Re: Trapped Along the Way
Hey Noe! I apologize that I didn’t get to this very speedy. Okay I’m going to be brutally honest. I hope you don’t mind. Remember, this is only like, your ...
Sep 17, 2014 -
Re: Minds like found art
Hello again! I love your poems so much I can't stay away~ I really like what you did here with the italics. It's like you're building a block tower, stanza ...
Sep 13, 2014 -
Re: The Bullet
D; Nooo that's so sad oh my gosh. You really kicked this one in the brains. It was so short and simple and effective . I love the last line. ...
Sep 13, 2014 -
Re: Pyro, pa
Hello! I keep reading this, and I'm not exactly sure what's going on, but I'll do my best. I enjoyed the first stanza. I understood it (or at least I ...
Sep 13, 2014 -
Re: It's Better
Hello! I like this poem. It makes me happy. It rings with truth. Okay, so I do like how you started the first couple lines with the same couple words, ...
Sep 13, 2014 -
Re: Rest
Hello~ (I may or may not be reviewing this because I just had an exceedingly long nap) This was a beautiful poem. I liked it a lot. I think I ...
Sep 13, 2014
