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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: A man - A poem inspired by "The Scream" by Edvard Munch, 1893

    Hello! So I'm going to give this a review based on the poem, so sorry if I advise you to do something that's not what you were supposed to do ...

    Oct 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Monument

    Hello~ Here for your requested review! So I printed out your poem and reviewed it in pen during school, so I'm gonna try to translate my markings into actual text ...

    Oct 18, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Autotonomy and Apoptosis

    Hello! I'm here to save your poem from the green room. This will be my 250th review with which I get my fifth star! Yaaay! *confetti* So I looked up ...

    Oct 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: It's Been Fun, Percy

    Heyo! I'm here to help get this out of the green room. First thing's first. Why did you make this so big? I can read, and if I can't, I ...

    Oct 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: The girl on gravel mountain ~Part One~

    Hello! Guess who's here to rip up your poem? That's riiight! It's Meeee! 8D (I'm a little hyped up on energy right now so sorry about *gestures at everything* this) ...

    Oct 6, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: rosa borealis

    hello, did someone order a review? So I think the main problem of this poem is that it's disjointed. You carry images over, stanza to stanza, but I'm not getting ...

    Oct 2, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Phaedra

    Yayayay! Hello. :D So I'mma analyze the title like I always do. I googled Phaedra, and wikipedia (bless its soul) told me all about her mythology. Phaedra means bright. This ...

    Sep 23, 2014
  • Lyrics » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: Don't Look at the flame

    Hello! Okay, I know you said these were lyrics, but I'm going to review it as a poem, kay? Because what are lyrics if not for a poem with music? ...

    Sep 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Just a Dream

    Hello! I'm here to save you from the clutches of the green room! This was a cute little simple poem. Sometimes I think simple poems may be the most honest ...

    Sep 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Trapped Along the Way

    Hey Noe! I apologize that I didn’t get to this very speedy. Okay I’m going to be brutally honest. I hope you don’t mind. Remember, this is only like, your ...

    Sep 17, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Minds like found art

    Hello again! I love your poems so much I can't stay away~ I really like what you did here with the italics. It's like you're building a block tower, stanza ...

    Sep 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Culture Re: The Bullet

    D; Nooo that's so sad oh my gosh. You really kicked this one in the brains. It was so short and simple and effective . I love the last line. ...

    Sep 13, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Pyro, pa

    Hello! I keep reading this, and I'm not exactly sure what's going on, but I'll do my best. I enjoyed the first stanza. I understood it (or at least I ...

    Sep 13, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: It's Better

    Hello! I like this poem. It makes me happy. It rings with truth. Okay, so I do like how you started the first couple lines with the same couple words, ...

    Sep 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Rest

    Hello~ (I may or may not be reviewing this because I just had an exceedingly long nap) This was a beautiful poem. I liked it a lot. I think I ...

    Sep 13, 2014


More than anything she wanted the world to be uncomplicated, for right and wrong to be as easily divided as the black and white sections of an Oreo. But the world was not a cookie.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Tree of Wishes