Rook

Hi lumister. I was looking for something to review, and I had this open, so I figured, why not? The title was what originally attracted me to this piece. I ...

Hello! Here to save you from the green room~ So I really like this concept, and I like the song you based it off of. Just the idea of eating ...

Heya Timmy! Because you requested a review, I'mma be tough. ^-^ I should let you know that I review lyrics basically like I would a poem, I’m just a little ...

Hello dd! I'm here as promised. I'm going to give you straightforward criticism, because you thought you needed some. :) Let's go stanza by stanza. Stanza one! A temple of ...

Hello! Very nice spiritual poem here. I like that you based it on a specific scripture. Just a couple things that could be fixed a bit: And protect you with ...

Okay so I'm back, after pondering. I think I liked this poem. Sometimes it's so hard to tell. I like what you did with the sometimes/rarely/always kind of thing. It ...

Hello! (I'm going to apologize right upfront for any disconnectedness in this review because the TV's on and distracting me) So I really liked the imagery of this. I could ...

Hello~ So this was interesting.... So I think one main thing that you need to know about here is the form for limericks. You didn't follow the layout which is: ...

Hello! Wow, I was not expecting that last line. What a kicker! It really changed the whole poem. I love surprises like that. So, I enjoyed this, but there are ...

Hello! Anything can count as poetry. :) I like the sentiments in this, about a girl relating to pictures on the wall. I think the largest problem with this is ...

Hello~ So yes, this was very short, but I'm not sure where the creativity was, sorry. This is a phrase everyone knows. I think one of the points of poetry ...

Hello! I thought this was a rather interesting poem. I liked the words you used: they were very descriptive and packed with imagery. I liked the story you told, how ...

Hello! So this was a peaceful poem, and I like the images that you use! However, I think that your rhyme is holding this poem back from being great. Almost ...

Hello~ I like how halloweeny this was. It reminds me of a witch’s chant/curse. There were some problems with it, however. Let’s do little nitpicks first. ashes to ashes So, ...

Hello! You really do have a knack for word choice. All of your words are delicious 10 point words packed with imagery and connotation. Sadly, there's so much of that ...