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Hello! An interesting poem. I feel like I am still puzzling through its twists. It kind of feels cubist, in the way that there seem to be multiple copies of ...

Hello! Sorry for typos, I'm typing this on my phone. This is a cool poem and a good tribute to an ancestor. I always think poems about ancestors we've never ...

Heya empole! This was such a cool sketch of a scene, a classroom I presume, and the type of inspirational posters that just sort of melt into the background. it's ...

Hello! warning, I'm typing this on my phone so there's sure to be typos and incorrect words! This is a lovely, languid poem, heavy with rich imagery. It puts a ...

Hello! This is an interesting poem! I thought you did a very nice job giving us a narrative with high stakes, and your descriptions were at times very vivid! I ...

Hello! This was a very interesting poem! I think the subject of ancestry is always a very rich and worthwhile subject for a poem and this is no exception. I ...

Hello! Typing on my phone so I'm sure to make lots of typos, so please excuse them! This was such a fascinating poem! I don't have much experience reading or ...

Hello! This poem I think speaks to a pretty common fear among most people. Change is scary and exciting! I think you've found a worthy subject matter for a poem! ...

Hello Grimmwolf! I really enjoyed this poem! I really liked the specific images you bring into focus here, such as the submarine and the perfect suburban lawn. I also was ...

Hello! I really enjoyed this poem and all the concrete (heh. like concrete and asphalt hehe) details you've used! I feel like this is a town that I can really ...

Hello! It's been a long time since I've reviewed something so apologies if I'm a bit rusty!! I think my favorite part of this was the line "there are so ...

Hello! I always love combining poetry with schoolwork. I remember writing a lot of poems alongside my chemistry worksheets haha. I've never been a big fan of math in general, ...

Hello! This is a great first poem/first poem to publish on here :D I really love the places where you have concrete sensory images, like "it pounds in my ears ...

Hey Lavv! This is a lovely poem! I love the sounds of the words and the scattered images that I'm given! It's really cool! I think the main critique I ...

Hello! I actually really like this poem. It's simple, but there's something really vital captured in that simplicity. You have an idea here and you chased it and caught it ...