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Quite the well written short here. In the first sentence alone, a dark and depressing atmosphere is established using words that shouldn't even be associated with depressing, such as bright ...

Wow, that certainly took a darker turn than expected. (Then again, I should've noticed the fact it was labeled as horror) First off, the main character was quickly characterized by ...

I've always liked when people of the modern times still create their own mythology for how and why the world works the way it does today. Naming the characters after ...

A very accurate description of the biggest thing plaguing modern writers. The fans. Each one thinks they have the amazing idea that you will take into consideration for your story. ...

This story is told so realistically as if it's an actual recounting of an event, its almost impossible to tell whether its real or fictional. The beginning is told so ...

Absolutely beautiful. The innocence of the first speaker is a sharp contrast to the older one was a nice touch. It's a good representation of how things actually are in ...

What at first seems to be a fantasy short story actually turns out to be another story with a life lesson. and it's a good one at that. Though i ...

A good start to this mock Batman series. The characterization of the "Goon" was spot on. These goons aren't insane, and more in it for the fun of killing or ...

A very interesting concept here. Normally, it's a school of superheroes where a few of them end up becoming super villains. But here, it's reversed. The school of villains ends ...

As with most of the stories in the Shorts section, the title had m expecting a short comedy. But instead, this was a somewhat depressing but hopefull story about one ...

There aren't many who can make such an ordinary event into such a suspensful short, but you did so almost perfectly. You took an event as simple as a trip ...

A very humorous story. The personification used was very good and entertaining, and the comical attitudes of all the soldiers made this a very good short comedy. The fact that ...

This is quite the original story idea. Like most short stories, this could easily become a full fledged novel. Despite the short length, the personality of each character was adequately ...

Such a good story despite it's short length. (Well, it is called the shorts section) You perceived the dangers of an artificial intelligence and put it into brilliant short story ...

A well written short story, even if it is a bit depressing but I was aware of that going in. The imagery used is very clear, and the emotions being ...