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Re: The devil in you
i here is an alliteration and a stress, this is a form of poetry i was trying to create, pardon me if it was irking but it is indeed a ...
Mar 24, 2015 -
Re: The devil in you
thank you, this review was a great help. and for the last line i mean to say that when you have to achieve success this devil in you would try ...
Mar 24, 2015 -
Re: The devil in you
thank you
Mar 24, 2015 -
Re: Sitting in the shadow
thank you and i would certainly take care of these points in my next work...
Mar 24, 2015 -
Re: Sitting in the shadow
thank you for the appreciation... i mentioned the phrase as figure in gloom to make him sound like insignificant and one among the crows lost in gloom, thank you again
Mar 24, 2015 -
Re: Sitting in the shadow
thank you so much for the appreciation- i wonder if i really own it.. thank you
Mar 22, 2015 -
Re: Fire and Ice [The novel] Prologue and Chapter 1
thank you for this helpful review
Mar 21, 2015 -
Re: Fire and Ice [The novel] Prologue and Chapter 1
thank you for the review i would certainly do the corrections
Mar 21, 2015 -
Re: Get over
Thank you so much.... I feel rather flattered...
Mar 19, 2015 -
Re: Get over
Thank you for the appreciation, i actually intentionally kept it short, this is my 1st trial to keep things highly compact and using every word minutely. And i would certainly ...
Mar 19, 2015 -
Re: Fire and Ice[ the novel] chapter 2
thank you so much and i would certainly edit my work as you suggest
Mar 18, 2015 -
Re: Fire and Ice [The novel] Prologue and Chapter 1
thank you so much for this review...
Mar 18, 2015 -
Re: Fire and Ice [The novel] Prologue and Chapter 1
thank you for spending time to read and review my work. i will certainly take more care next time to avoid the mistakes. and for the part of avatar i ...
Mar 18, 2015 -
Re: Thoughts as he went further and further
yes i think the rhythm killed the sense too and many other suggested the same error. i would rather amend it right now. please give a reading to it after ...
Mar 16, 2015 -
Re: I flow on as I sing this song
thank you so much for this encouragement, i had already posted some other works and i hope you will sneak a look at them too. thank you again and i ...
Mar 16, 2015
