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RituparnaBhowmik

  • Poetry » Spiritual, Satire Re: The devil in you

    i here is an alliteration and a stress, this is a form of poetry i was trying to create, pardon me if it was irking but it is indeed a ...

    Mar 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Satire Re: The devil in you

    thank you, this review was a great help. and for the last line i mean to say that when you have to achieve success this devil in you would try ...

    Mar 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Satire Re: The devil in you

    thank you

    Mar 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Sitting in the shadow

    thank you and i would certainly take care of these points in my next work...

    Mar 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Sitting in the shadow

    thank you for the appreciation... i mentioned the phrase as figure in gloom to make him sound like insignificant and one among the crows lost in gloom, thank you again

    Mar 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Sitting in the shadow

    thank you so much for the appreciation- i wonder if i really own it.. thank you

    Mar 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Fire and Ice [The novel] Prologue and Chapter 1

    thank you for this helpful review

    Mar 21, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Fire and Ice [The novel] Prologue and Chapter 1

    thank you for the review i would certainly do the corrections

    Mar 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Get over

    Thank you so much.... I feel rather flattered...

    Mar 19, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Get over

    Thank you for the appreciation, i actually intentionally kept it short, this is my 1st trial to keep things highly compact and using every word minutely. And i would certainly ...

    Mar 19, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Fire and Ice[ the novel] chapter 2

    thank you so much and i would certainly edit my work as you suggest

    Mar 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Fire and Ice [The novel] Prologue and Chapter 1

    thank you so much for this review...

    Mar 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Fire and Ice [The novel] Prologue and Chapter 1

    thank you for spending time to read and review my work. i will certainly take more care next time to avoid the mistakes. and for the part of avatar i ...

    Mar 18, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Thoughts as he went further and further

    yes i think the rhythm killed the sense too and many other suggested the same error. i would rather amend it right now. please give a reading to it after ...

    Mar 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Spiritual Re: I flow on as I sing this song

    thank you so much for this encouragement, i had already posted some other works and i hope you will sneak a look at them too. thank you again and i ...

    Mar 16, 2015


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