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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Last Art

    Although I loved this and it is indeed quite intellectual. I'm going to be bold and do the opposite of what everyone else just did, I'm going to give you ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Mirror, Mirror

    This is definitely one of my favorites. Being someone who is quite interested in psychology, I very much enjoyed this and found your delivery of such an emotional theme very ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I am the Apple

    I know I'm supposed to give some kind of constructive review, so I didn't review this the first time I read it. Then, the title caught my eye once more ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Somewhere Over The Rooftop.

    This poem is very simple, yet quite lovely and easy to relate to. I agree with the others in terms of their critiques, however I would also like to add ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: deleted

    I found this incredibly clever! You've portrayed a very powerful theme in just a few only critique is that the rhythm could be much better balanced...perhaps balancing out the syllables ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Son of the moon

    First of all...I love this! Son of the moon - Slightly edited - That red sky tonight, means the moon is on fire. Your black tongue, hints you’re a pretty ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Creation of the Universe

    This is absolutely brilliant. The way you use your imagery (I LOVE THIS! So Éleïl shed his fingernails, crushed them and scattered them across the void. As the particles flew, ...

    Mar 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: From Life

    I suppose this is more of a clearly structured rant than a poem, which, in my opinion, is a good thing. It's quite straightforward and easy to relate to. There's ...

    Mar 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Immortality

    I must say this is the most intriguing poem I have yet to read on here. I'd like to disagree with one of the comments about their critique of "Never ...

    Mar 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Morgan's Lullaby

    This is incredibly sweet with much wisdom subtly woven into its lines. I would like, however, to draw attention to the fact that despite any errors pointed out by the ...

    Mar 6, 2011


Knowing too much of your future is never a good thing.
— Rick Riordan, The Lightning Thief