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Re: Quest for Fire Book one ~ Into the Mists Chapter 17
Hello, Ripple once again. This will probably be my last review of the day, but I'll be sure to read the last chapter in the morning. “Who are more important? ...
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Re: Quest for Fire Book one ~ Into the Mists Chapter 16
Hello, Ripple again! Maybe I'll be able to finish it all before Review Day is over, we'll see. The bridge was in good condition and had fruit vines winding around ...
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Re: Quest for Fire Book one ~ Into the Mists Chapter 15
Hello! Ripple yet again, with another review. :) Strange sounds filled the air as the day wore on. Mist started to float through the forest, twisting and winding around the ...
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Re: Quest for Fire Book one ~ Into the Mists Chapter 14
Hello, Ripple again. Let's do this. Picking up the stone tablet and carefully putting it in his jaws, Zoltar slowly crept out into the open, keeping a careful look out ...
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Re: Quest for Fire Book one ~ Into the Mists Chapter 13
Hello, Ripple again, ready to review! The sea of scowling faces bore down on Zoltar as he walked through the hazy town. Dragons were snarling and growling at him. Hot ...
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Re: Quest for Fire Book one ~ Into the Mists Chapter 12
Greetings, Ripple here. Again. To review. As usual. :) He detested that everyone didn’t trust shadow talons just because of what they’d done centuries ago. It wasn't like he'd been ...
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Re: Quest for Fire Book one ~ Into the Mists Chapter 11
Hello, Ripple here! The noises in the forest had warped from sweet chirps and whistles to a more threatening tune. Insects started to play their music from the leaves on ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Quest for Fire Book one ~ Into the Mists Chapter 10
Hello, Ripple yet again. I am really enjoying reading all of these chapters so far. :) This something was sticking its claws into his scales and was sitting on him ...
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Re: When the Green Light Doesn't Turn On
Very interesting concept. I'm eager to review it. :) Sitting on her chair at school, Phantyne twisted her untamable straw blonde hair into a ringlet. Couldn’t classes be a little ...
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Re: Quest for Fire Book one ~ Into the Mists Chapter 9
Hello! Ripple once again, itching to review. :) He could also hear Felistia's soft breaths and Shiraku’s steam train snores behind him. This is an excellent way to indirectly characterize ...
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Re: Quest for Fire Book one ~ Into the Mists Chapter 8
Hello! Ripple yet again. Hopefully these reviews are helpful. Time seemed to stand still as the Shang Fu's stinger zoomed towards Zoltar’s exposed spine. Suddenly, there was a blast of ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Inside of me.
I really liked this poem, and I think it accurately describes those ponderings of "What makes up me?" Inside of me is me given to me by me All of ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Chapter 3: Homework and Hats (Part 1)
...Now I find the first part. :P Hello, Ripple here. I didn't realize that the first part was still in the green room, so I've already read the second part. ...
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Re: Quest for Fire Book one ~ Into the Mists Chapter 7
Ripple again, ready to review. :D The mountains shone a flaming crimson as the sun rose over the towering peaks. It bathed the moon talon village in bright ruby and ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Quest for Fire Book one ~ Into the Mists Chapter 6
Hello, Ripple again! A great billowing carpet of white clouds swirled below Zoltar. His shadow danced on the sun lit blanket while the bright yellow sun reflected off his obsidian ...
Jun 26, 2016
