Riedawriter23

This was great! Jon is sadly...breaking. It seems as though he won't last much longer. At first this therapy was helping him now, it's desroying him! He's having a lot ...

This was really good. A lot more feeling than the other two camera Pro.s. In the lens: a woman with her eyes rolled back into her skull, brutal bite marks ...

I feel so bad for Jon. But I think it's obvious that he's needed a therapist for a LONG time. This actually seems to be helping him. The therapist is ...

Poor Jon. It seems like he's almost being broken down right now. He's actually taking on the characteristics of a crazy person...though knowing Jon as a character, I imagine that ...

Lol, for a second I thought that Maviance was completely heartless. This is a very interesing plot you have here! I love the idea that the babies within the pregnant ...

This was really good. You created the pregnant woman's behaviour and attitude perfectly, she seemed very new-motherly and irritable. Your word choice is also wonderful. They paint a wonderful picture ...

I can so see this as a movie! Of course nothing would be able to beat the book, the book (speaking for the near future :) ) is going to ...

This was great! Kyle cried! and did Jon...just realize what was going on with him? Haha, that's really sad, he didn't get to see any of Kyle's real feelings as ...

KJ, that's so adorable. And Kyle and Jon are still getting closer! Kyle is actually starting to feel things that Jon isn't or at least isn't showing that he's feeling! ...

XD this was so cute! I think the first part was in Ch. though? I can't help but remember the wimpy Jon as Ariel jumped on him thing and Kyle ...

Awwww. That was such a cute one. Jon and Kyle,Kyle and has a nice ring to it don't you think? Hehe, I love these ones, when Kyle figures that something ...

This was wonderful! I could actually apply my element knowledge to know what you were talking about. :) *feels proud* Nicholas is mean but also a really fun character I ...

Haha, I can actually sing this! Twas wonderful! :) Who knew grew was such a songwriter?! (probably a lot of people, but not me) I think I might save this ...

Okay I lied, this may be the best Prosthesis ever (it's almost beating the kiss, and that's only because I like Kyle and Jon kissing!) You had me for a ...

Hm, this was really nice. I actually liked the longness to it. I hope to actually hear it at some point though because I couldn't find the music it would ...