Riedawriter23

Aww, this was really beautiful and sad. I loved your analogies throughout the whole thing. It all sort have felt like a poem, it flowed very nicely. This was when ...

Poor Kyle! Like seriously, Dr.Haaser should die. I only like, half way believe that what Dr.Haaser put in Kyle's stomach was a monitering device, I mean I know they need ...

Ooo, this made me shiver all over Jig. But it was great in it's unique creepy way. Lol, I loved the whole concept. I didn't really think that the old ...

Aha! I knew Ariel was evil. She can't be completely good, it just seems so impossible. But she hurt Jon! I don't know how much more hurt Jon can take. ...

This was great! Great in the sense that...Kyle is being destroyed! *shudders* He can't move and ontop of that Jon is doing or has done something that he doesn't even ...

I can't believe we're already on number 40! Awww, this is gonna turn out like Ch. huh :( , where it will be taken away from me and I'll have ...

Ooo this was very nice and very different! I still don't know who this character is but I'm starting to really like her, and this shadow thing! This plot is ...

Kyle spat, “He can—he can have me!” :) That's my favorite line, THAT'S the real Kyle confession. Help destroy Jon!? That's terrible! They finally both agree on something (even though ...

*gasp* He's out? He can't just all of the sudden say that Kyle's out and then be with that...that..ARIEL. Ew. Ariel is such a freakin tease Grrrr. This better be ...

This was very nice. Jared is of course evil, but killing someone at the age of 13?! I really didn't expect that, great job :). I'm also glad to see ...

Wow, this was full of action! I loved it when she was being dragged under the water, that was awesome. I'm dying to know who this is though. I'm feeling ...

Kyle admitted he loved Jon. *sigh* That made my night. :). I'm so happy that he made his confessions, it was hilarious, yet sad, yet happy at the same time. ...

This is turning out so well! I'm loving Quinn, you've had great character development with him and his personality is so interesting and intruiging. Lol, I like how he can ...

I'm not sure if this is all fake or what but I'm loving every second of it! Mostly because Jon and Kyle kissed and that well...Kyle isn't dead! Or...he could ...

Tis a great concept...but it lacks a great rhyming pattern. 1.The old carving on my school desk, is imprinting in my arm, It says "Your Dead" but it does no ...