Reyu

Hi there. Just a few little suggestions my friend... It has been made more powerful than any sword has a right to be , through crushed prayers, betrayal, and tears ...

Hey Reyu, im totally amazed at the fact that my account is still active! though i tried to get on to my old old account but it was gone! i ...

First, your formatting is making the post kind of huge, but that's not a huge issue. o.O By all laws of the human mind they should have had me completely ...

Aghh. Is this past or present tense? Because at the moment, I'm killing myself trying to figure it out. Please, pick one and go through and edit it accordingly. If ...

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First off, disclaimers never work :P Second off, the main character had two sisters. Use your imagination for how she killed her self. I felt that a moot point and ...

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Just finished putting this in my portable USB. I have been wanting to read more for a long time >< Never knew you put this up here. I will try ...

“But we live so far apart.” James concluded, suddenly looking blue. “Yeah…” Elayne said sadly Another paragraph should start when Elayne says "Yeah..." and the paragraph after this one shoul

"Growing up an only child can be lonely sometimes and I often think what life would be like if I had been blessed with a brother or a sister around ...

His master gave him the sword :) Wouldn't you assume it was him? It was NOT a vision. Anyway, thanks for the input. I will come back later and fix ...

Made me think of "The Pit and the Pendulum" but im weird. 8)