RepublicOfCoter

Hey king! You continue to amaze me! I was so surprised at the ending-I love your twists and climaxes you have in your stories (unbelievable). At first, I thought it ...

Hey Cap! I have to totally agree with Snoik-very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very repetitive (one very for each Sometimes I feel/think used) Kind of annoying, ...

Hey, kingolions! Don't quite know what to say here. I wouldn't say it's one of your best poems yet not one of your worst *raises one eyebrow and looks up ...

Hey kingolions, You continue to better yourself with each new poem. I loved this poem! It gave off this nice serenity feel to it because you didn't use harsh words ...

Hey kingolions! This poem was as dull as dull can be. Where is the imagery? I mean, I've read your other work and that has some fantastic descriptions but this ...

Hey iheartbooks! I would have to agree with Calligraphy: the beginning of the poem was fantastic but it seemed to die down to much for my liking. It did pick ...

Hey jasminebells! I really liked this poem! It had something new to it that I hadn't read before! I totally understand where this poem is coming from. It was nice ...

Hey kingolions! I liked this poem. It was different to what I have read which was a relief. I was enjoying up until he got hit by a bus (which ...

Hey SwaggVicious! Like the username, I must say. I really enjoyed this poem. It had this danger, scariness to it mixed with a little bit depression :smt001. It was an ...

Hey xxKittyKatxx! Loved it! Simply astonishing! Love the shortness to it which makes it beautifully written! But I do think you contradict the title with a line from you poem: ...

Hey Yuriiko! I liked the idea of the poem but the poem itself was a bit shaky. If you tried to make it rhyme, I suggest you go over it ...

Hey screamandshout! Just wait a minute, need to dry the tears from my eyes (figuratively). It's so sad. But that's what I like about it-I'm not a big fan of ...

Hey screamandshout! I really liked this poem. It's like one of those poems where 'I like him but does he like me' sort of. It was written quite well and ...

Hi AutumnSun! I liked the idea of this poem. It was written well which kept me interested. To me, it was a new style of rhyming that you introduced-that being ...

Hey! I thought this was really good! The emotion you provoke from this poem is amazing! It has this kind of sadness to it but not entirely. I felt happy ...