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Re: My Quotes
Hey Captain! I'm RepublicOfCoter but you may call me ROC! I'm relatively new to reviewing so don't judge to harshly on what I'm about to say. The first thing I ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: Broken Fairytale
Hey Emely! Peanut19 took the words right from my mouth. Like I said in my last review of your other poem, you need to check spelling, punctuation and grammar. These ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: Those Moments
Hey Emely! I'm RepublicOfCoter but you can call me ROC. I'll be your reviewer and, by the way, I'm new to YWS so I may be a bit rusty when ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: Making the most of what?
Hey Cap! I didn't quite enjoy this poem due to the fact that it is a block of text. Separating them and putting it into stanzas really helps create a ...
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: Goodbye
Hi, I'm RepublicOfCoter (people just call me ROC) and I'll be your reviewer for this piece. The very first thing I'd like to say is that I simply LOVED it! ...
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: Your Soft Blue Eyes
Hey king! This poem was fantastic! I really enjoyed the way you described what the narrator was feeling and what he felt. The climax of the poem was the conclusion. ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: Fire
I quite enjoyed this as I totally understand what you talking about. Despite that, I feel that I have to agree with the points brought by StoryWeaver13. They main topic ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: As each minute passes by
Hello there king! Yes, I am reviewing yet another one of your fantastic pieces of work. However, this piece didn't strike me as fantastic nor as enjoyable but more of ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: I Shall Never Write For You
Hey king, This particular poem I didn't quite enjoy. Unlike your other poems, this one didn't give of that feeling of dread and despair or, like your others, depression. It ...
Jun 15, 2010 -
Re: Every Day and Night
Hello, your majesty, May I just say, this is the best poem that I've read that you've written! I really enjoyed it! After reading a few of the other reviews ...
Jun 15, 2010 -
Re: Life, Death, and Everything in Between
Hey king! This is probably my second ever review so don't judge too harshly on what I'm about to say. I didn't quite enjoy this poem; I've read some of ...
Jun 15, 2010 -
Re: The World Is My Dream
Hey there! If you don't know who I am, I am RepublicofCoter and I will be your reviewer today. As I was reading it, I felt as if something was ...
Jun 4, 2010
